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2004-09-29, 7:06 PM #1
I have to write an essay for Intro to Political Theory about the conflict with the Republican and Liberal arguments of public good(or as I see it, Moral Conformity) and Personal Liberty, respectively. Just so you know, I mean classic Republican and Liberal. Not their definition as they are known today(though there are still some similiarities). I would appreciate it if anyone knowledgable on this issue would read my more than 4 page essay(double spaced) and give me feed back. thank you.

note: I apologize for the poorly looking formatting. Massassi doesn't have much in that respect. Trust me, it looks better in Word.

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Moral Conformity or Individual Rights?

The argument between what is best for a nation, pursuing public good over personal freedom or vice versa, is a question that have been debated for centuries. I side mostly with classic liberals, especially John Stuart Mill, on this issue. The entire point of democracy is to provide liberty and freedom, and to take those things away which aren’t harmful to society is taking a step back in the line of progression. It is through this personal freedom that public good can be attained.

Republicanism and liberalism are different paralalls going in the same direction. Both idelogues want a prosperous society, but they go about it in different ways. Republicanism states that in order for a society to be a prosperous society, certain ethics must be followed. Liberalists are of the thought that personal liberty will make a truly free, and consequentally progressive, society. Both of these ideaologies have glaring weaknesses.

Republicans are of the opinion that public good is the ultimate goal. But what price should be paid for that ultimate goal, which in my opinion, is impossible to attain? How willing should people be to give up some of their freedom so that a near public good can be achieved? Freedoms should not be infringed upon just to make other people content that things are running the way they think they are supposed to. Now, obviously, there are some exceptions to this. If a nation were to be invaded, it is certainly right for a government to conscript it’s citizens to fight on the battlefield because everybody’s rights are in danger. This is a self-interest argument on a grander scale, which I shall go more in depth later. The same argument can be applied on outlawing mala in se(offense in itself) crimes such as homicide but it is on a smaller scale. Speaking of laws, one republican argument is that good laws make good people. Liberalists have debunked this argument because it is a catch twenty-two. The only way it can work, it has been argued, if for a virtuous “legislator” to create the laws that everyone has to follow. However, naturally virtuous men are few and far between, so waiting on one would be a waste of time. One thing I will about republicanism that I think could work is majority rule, but only in special circumstances. In a mostly homogenous society with little protection of basic rights, majority rule could be disasterous. It would just be the same people ruling because they all had the same values. However, in a heterogenous society with protection on basic rights, majority rule can be effective. If a society is heterogenous, that means that no one group is in the majority all the time because off all the tiny factions have to ally themselves with different factions on different issues. A prime example of this would be America. Now that I’ve addressed a few things I don’t like about republicanism, lets move on to some things I don’t like about liberalism.

The problem with most liberalists is that they are hopeless romantics. They see freedom and personal rights as something as naturally belonging to a person as if it were a heart or liver. But rights are not God-given, as Jefferson and Locke have said, but must be earned. Whither it is through spilling your blood on the battlefield or having the luck of being born in a place of liberal thought, is irrelevant. Both of those scenarios lead to the same consequences, which is all that matters. Now that I have defined what I do not like about the idealogue I subscribe to, I’ll explain what I do like and what I do support.

The whole idea of self-interest and other-interest I find valuable. The basic of it is that any action that is self-interested is no business of the government’s or any other people so it should not be infringed upon. Now, there are obvious examples I could use like someone who enjoys picking their nose until it bleeds or banging their head against the wall. Either one isn’t healthy, but it only regards the self. It is within a person’s right to hurt themselves like such if they wish and I don’t feel like playing nanny to everyone anyway. If they don’t have the common sense not to hurt themselves, then Darwin is just doing his job. However, things are very rarely so cut and dry. What about hard drugs? Hard drugs only hurt the self after all. If a person wants to get a high and can deal with the side effects of slowed reaction time, lowering of mental thinking capacities, or the complete twisting of sense and perception, what is wrong with that? It’s his choice to jack himself up, hence self-interest. But is it always a case of self-interest? What if the high person is driving a car or becomes paranoid and goes for the loaded revolver he has in the closet, intent on silencing those that, he thinks at the time, are talking behind his back? What if the extreme fear of cops in someone getting high off crack makes him do stupid and dangerous things to avoid them? Obviously, when other people’s freedom comes into the equation and is threatened, the issue becomes other-interested. Now, we could say that while your high you can’t drive a car, have to stay in your house, and you can’t get high at all if you have a family to support or some such. But how would we enforce that? That is a nearly impossible task to enforce. So, as it has been said before by other liberalists, all the variables have to be taken into account to determine if something to going to affect just the person doing it, or more than just the single person. You can’t take an issue at face value.

Now, I wish to come up with my own theory that I have developed, which is not to say I haven’t been influenced, because I have been. I also doubt I’m the first to say these things, but I have yet to see this theory stated. Whither that is the fault of circumstance or a failure of comprehension on my part will be determined. British law came up with a system in the court called an “adversarial system” which is implemented in many countries, including America. Basically this system relies on two opponents, the prosecutor and defendant, taking the biases of the facts they have and ramming them together and that through this process of hearing two different conflicting stories that fact and truth will be found. American economics work in a similar way. If you have two or more competing companies, they will continually try to make the best and most affordable product to get more money and in the end the consumer will benefit from this competition. This is something Adam Smith has illustrated. What I propose is we take this adversarial and capitalist system and apply it to freedoms. Allow all primarily self-interested freedoms to be exercised. Eventually, the damaging and harmful ones are going to be weeded out because no sane person would want to harm themselves and the people who do the harmful things will damage themselves to the point of extinction or near extinction. Heartless and unempathic, yes. But in the end, it would better society as whole. All the good acts would remain in society because they have good consequences. Now, this degeneration of bad acts wouldn’t happen over night. It would probably take decades but in the end it would be worth it.

Public good is something everybody wants, but not everybody is using the same map. That is why it is valuable to keep your mind open and look for the shortest route to the destination, whither it was on your map or someone elses. I think the liberal idealogue implements this principle the best.
Democracy: rule by the stupid
2004-09-29, 7:18 PM #2
Is there a clear thesis?
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2004-09-29, 7:37 PM #3
Where to being...?

Writing:

1) Try to stay in one voice throughout. You start first person singular, but you also throw in some second person. Never say "you" in a paper. First person plural ("we", "our", "us"), in my opinion (and my english teacher's opinion) is a great way to write. Most professionals write that way.

2) Needs a clear thesis statement. A lot of the paper gets very confused due to its structure or lack thereof.

3) You like the word "however". Try inserting it periodically. Instead of: "However, I disasgree." do "I, however, disagree." It adds a bit of variety to the writing.



Ok, now on the arguments.

You need a lot more warrants. For example, you make the assertion that natural rights don't exist as Locke describes. Why not? Even if we have to go to war to defend our ability to excericise those rights, does that prove they don't exist?

Locke writes that we enter into a social contract. We do this because we are self interested and seek to protect our ability to excercise natural rights. The contract is as follows:

* Government agrees to protect your right to life, liberty, and property. Property is actually the main one. According to Locke, our rights to life and liberty are derived from our right to property. That's probably outside the scope of discussion though.

* Individuals agree to follow law.

This framework establishes that the purpose of law is natural rights. Which side of your story best upholds that ideal?

I think if you approached it by first establishing individual and government obligations then the essay would be far easier to follow and better.

But if you want better reasons why we don't have natural rights, look up Bentham's stuff. I haven't read Bentham, but you should like him since you are such a big JS Mill fan. ;)

The paper gets really whack when you start talking about self interest. Why is it in my self interest to get high on crack? Why is it in my own interest to hurt another human being? The answer: it's not. There's a difference between percieved self interest and rational self interest.


More ideas will be coming from me tommorrow, if I have time.
2004-09-29, 7:39 PM #4
Yoshimi drew this but never used it...
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2004-09-29, 7:45 PM #5
I have the thesis (last sentence in intro, I talk about it the entire time.) I probably do need more structure. I need to put say what points I'm going to argue one in my intro.

I thought I addressed Locke's (and other's) outlook on liberty in my part about most liberalists being romantics and idealists. I'm approaching it from a consequential view point, like Mill does.

Why do I need to bring in the social contract? That's not part of what i'm arguing.

self-interest(in this sense) means it only pertains to you, not that it is for your benefit. As in "I'm only interested in my self".
Democracy: rule by the stupid
2004-09-29, 8:16 PM #6
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Originally posted by Kieran Horn
I thought I addressed Locke's (and other's) outlook on liberty in my part about most liberalists being romantics and idealists. I'm approaching it from a consequential view point, like Mill does.


That paragraph doesn't have many warrants. Just a bunch of claims. Why don't we have natural rights? Why is Locke liberal? What about consequentialism defeats Locke's philosophy? That point isn't clear at all.

Also, why aren't rights God-given? The main arguments for natural rights is theist and the key arguments against natural rights are generally atheistic.

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Why do I need to bring in the social contract? That's not part of what i'm arguing.


That's just my suggested way of going about it. Government is ultimately founded on some idea of social contract. (Social contract defines what the government is supposed to do). So it's easier to know if Republicans/Liberals are "doing their jobs" if we have a clear focus on what their jobs are. I guess you use Mill's utliliaterianism to define government's role. But if you took my approach you'd give reasons why democracy needs to defend freedom and liberty. You sort of assert that and go off that assumption.

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self-interest(in this sense) means it only pertains to you, not that it is for your benefit. As in "I'm only interested in my self".


That's an odd interpretation of it. If I help a girl carry her books in an attempt to get her to like me, then I'm acting for myself. That's self-interested. Where do you get your defintion of that idea? Ayn Rand believes self interest includes helping others. Thomas Hobbes believes that we form society (which requires looking out for others) for our own self interest.
2004-09-29, 9:04 PM #7
Um, I'm not arguing about why or why not democracy needs to protect liberty. I'm arguing public good vs. personal freedom. Each are different facets of liberty. (now that I look at it, I did vaguely mention democracy defending liberty. I need to either expand on that to make it related to the issue or get rid of it).


Self-interest: something(usually actions) that only affects you(or primarily you) and doesn't infringe on other people's liberties(may piss them off though). Also means you care primarily about yourself.

Other-interest: something(usually actions) that affects the liberties of others. Murder is an Other-interest action, as is welfare.

Yes, self-interest can lead to people forming profitable societies, and that's because the people are looking out for themselves and forming a society is the best way to get what they want.
Democracy: rule by the stupid
2004-09-29, 9:27 PM #8
OK....this is a little long (and by "little" I mean a lot), so take in what you want.

I am a little confused about the definitions of many words that you are using. I must admit that I'm not as familiar with political theory as you are, since I have not taken a formal class in that topic.

Republicanism - What do you mean by this word? By "classic" definition are you assuming that you mean the idea that government ought to consist of a set of people elected by a specific electorate? Or, are you defining "republicanism" in the context of the US Republican Party? If this is the case, then which Republican party? The one since Reagan, the one with Goldwater-esque conservatism, or the anti-slavery one with Lincoln?

"Liberalist" - I think the proper term is "liberal." Despite whatever connotations it has right now, "liberal" is the correct grammatical term to define a person who subscribes to liberalism. You also describe them as "hopeless romantics," but I you can also use that to describe any person who believes in an ideal theory.

To describe "republicanism" and "liberalism," the correct word is "ideology," not "ideologue," a person who believes in a specific ideology.

Rights - Are rights and privileges interchangeable, or are they two distinctly different items?

Public Good - At first, I was thinking the economic term - you know, to describe water, air, and sunlight, etc. - but I guess you're talking about what is "right" for society in general (and thus moral conformity).

You assume that the "public good" and personal freedom are not compatible with each other, or at least that is the premise that you start with. Why? I know it's an unanswered debate, but since your entire paper is based on it, it wouldn't hurt to cite examples of the incompatibility. Using those examples, you might then want to point out flaws in them to bolster your own argument.

Unfortunately, your proposed theory has several gaps in it that you must address. If you wanted to apply personal freedoms much like the capitalist models of Adam Smith, you have to address the consequences of that course of action. While competition (in the economic model) is good for consumers, eventually, it may be that only one company survives, resulting in a monopoly. A monopoly will then do whatever it will to maximize its profits. The flaw in your argument, however, is that you assume that individuals in a given society do not change. While those who decide to harm themselves will drive themselves to extinction, this assumes that no "sane person" will switch over into the other group of people. It also assumes that each succeeding generation will keep the trend.

Regarding paper form, it is best to avoid any first and second person voice unless your instructor doesn't care too much. Do not invert your sentence structure unless you absolutely have to (example: "The whole idea of self-interest and other-interest I find valuable."). It is a little awkward and may cause an interruption to the flow of your paper.

Hope this helps.

(And holy cow this new system (vBulletin) is so much fancier than infopoop! I mean infopop....)
2004-09-29, 9:50 PM #9
Republicanism: I stated what I meant earlier. I mean the classic definitions in this paper. And a Republican is more than elected officials. Only some(structural Republicans) believe in that.

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You assume that the "public good" and personal freedom are not compatible with each other, or at least that is the premise that you start with.
No. I'm saying the exact opposite in one of my paragraphs. I'm saying personal freedom is the best way to get to public good. I made that especially apparent in my second to last paragraph.

My instructor actually likes when "I" is used.
Democracy: rule by the stupid
2004-09-30, 12:18 PM #10
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Originally posted by Kieran Horn
I have to write an essay for Intro to Political Theory about the conflict with the Republican and Liberal arguments of public good(or as I see it, Moral Conformity) and Personal Liberty, respectively. Just so you know, I mean classic Republican and Liberal. Not their definition as they are known today(though there are still some similiarities). I would appreciate it if anyone knowledgable on this issue would read my more than 4 page essay(double spaced) and give me feed back. thank you.

note: I apologize for the poorly looking formatting. Massassi doesn't have much in that respect. Trust me, it looks better in Word.



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2004-09-30, 12:38 PM #11
No thanks. I already made some corrections and handed it in. But if you still want to "hook us up", that would be great. I need some lovin. :D
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2004-09-30, 12:53 PM #12
Like someone mentioned earlier, the term "hopeless romantics" could be used to describe anyone with any idealist set of beliefs.

Also, you use the argument that hard drugs can cause damage to others as a way of describing a down-side of liberalism in relation with personal freedom vs public freedom on a wide scale. The problem is that in a case where someone, say, gets high on PCP and commits murder, it's still a personal issue on a small scale involving one or two people (as you described youself at some point). In such a case, there's an offender and a victim, but no large scale consequence on the general public.

A better example would be something like smoking, or yet, driving a large vehicle and the subsequent negative effect on the environment. On a large scale, the pollution you emit contributes to destroying other people's property (and therefore, their rights to property), versus your right to own the vehicle of your choice.
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2004-09-30, 2:16 PM #13
What political theory have you guy's read?

The reason I ask is because I thought the confusion over what I was saying was my fault. I took it to the class TA so he could review it and he understood everything I said(didn't necessarily agree though).

I'm beginning to think that you can't just take a principle like "other-interest" and understand it just by how it looks and using common inference skills. God knows theorists spend pages describing seemingly simply terms. Artistotle devoted an entire section to defining what a democracy is.
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2004-09-30, 2:19 PM #14
I have no idea about politically correct things (or politics for that matter), but i do have some good forum pics..... so.... ;)
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2004-09-30, 2:28 PM #15
....ok...
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