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....smal story....
2005-07-09, 10:33 AM #1
Long Version (I'm sure it is full of mistakes lol)


Everthing begans with just a little problem.....

I have theese 2 good friends (Gregor and Tom). One day Tom said something bad about the girlfriend of Gregor. Gregor toldt it her and

she was writing an sms to Tom: I heard what you said about me blah blah blah... When he asked her who told her what he said about her she said: It was Yasin...(btw Yasin is my real name) I was like WTF!!!, I don't knew her well but to use my nmae just to secure her boyfriend.... Then two weeks ago I had mine class-Party(because school is over now!!!!ok not for me (>^-^)>...) At the beginning of the day I met a very nice Girl (a good friend of another friend).Me and her (the girl) where at a Friends house (Sven).He (Sven) was leaving for some minutes and She and me where siting on his couch, she came over and snuggled (right word?) with me and such. after that we where playing playstation and had much fun. 30 minutes later We had to leave because I had to go to my class party. She brought me to the Tram-station and gave me a hug. So i was going to the party. The party was very cool and ended 1.30 am. At the Party I send her (the girl) an sms and asked if we could meet one day, she said yeah of course would be cool. Then after the party I took the next bus back an trying to call a friend 2 times after the second time I realized that his handy was off, what is very weird...
That day i was the first time at his home and i have to find the way to there alone at 1.30 am O_o. Ok finaly i found his house. At his house he (Sven) told me that one of my best friends (Patrick) stole his handy. So we where driving from 6.00 am to 7.00 am to him (he lives somewhere outside of the citiy (more than 5 kilometers i think) and I have to find the way to his house (btw i was at his home also only one time and at it was midnight). So finaly we found his home. After 30 minutes waiting he finaly came down and talked with us he gave him the phone back and payed the money for a new card(because the old one got lost). After that we drove back and I went back home(this time my house). My father was a bit angry because my sister made something bad and blah blah so my das was argueing with me. Next day I decided to send the girl an sms to tell here about my feelings for her. I was waiting and waiting, nothing came back. Next I got an answer an bad answer.. I was feel down to the ground and was lying there for an while. Next day I went out with some friends she was there too. Every time I saw her I was feeling bad... 1 week later (it happened more but not so importent) some friends and me where going to an disco. To get in she had to act like she was my girlfriend( I was feeling very bad at that time). Well, then I had some fun, but then i saw that she was kissing with a good friend of me just in front of me. She was leaving with him too(she wanted to sleep at a friends house but didn't do it). Next day she said to me please to not tell Joshi (the girl she wanted to go to her after the disco) that i was at his house.... So this is just a little part of my problems....don't wonder if I'm not here somedays

Short Story

Take a pile of sh*** and mix it with many love,friends and family-problems


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2005-07-09, 11:14 AM #2
....I...can't...read...
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2005-07-09, 11:16 AM #3
What's a handy? American connotations lend your story to meanings I'm sure you didn't intend.
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2005-07-09, 11:18 AM #4
I stopped reading after seeing the thread title "smal[l] story" and then seeing the words "Long Version." Too much to consider to be small.
2005-07-09, 12:02 PM #5
Well, whatever happens, just remeber...Yasin is a cool name.
2005-07-09, 12:16 PM #6
handy = cell phone
2005-07-09, 12:18 PM #7
Although your story didn't make any sense, I did understand something about your girlfriend cheating on you. Yeah, that's tough buddy. Hope things get better.

In the future, you might want to use paragraphs, less parentheses and organize your thoughts in a more cohesive manner though...
2005-07-09, 12:25 PM #8
I think I understood it pretty well, I have a lot of dissapointment in my life right now too, so I can relate.
I have a question for you, are you from Germany, or more specifically, speak german as a first language? You're sentence structure reminds me of translating from german to english. If you want me to, I could try to organize your story a little more so it's a bit easier to understand.

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