Don't worry I wont be posting any more reviews. I'm doing this mostly as language practice. So here is my review of Batman Arkham Asylum


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RyABo5R9GkM

'another' or 'an other'

There you see? I need a lot of practice

I would have watched the review, except I don't have sound at work

Is your Games for Windows Live in Polish?

That intro music.
Kill it.
Hasselhof joke reeks of "Family Guy comedy" I.E forced randomness that drags on for too long.

I've never once seen that thing in polish. Not that I looked or anything. Thanks for watching everyone. I've been told the David thing is a bit to long. I just couldn't find the right place to cut it. As for the intro music. It's my band so it stays no matter what.

Then, pardon my *******ry, your band sucks.

tibby... you suck

you can't judge a band by some short intro music that is generic and basic

Bla bla bla...:rolleyes:

If you put it on the internet, you damn well better be ready for people to think it's terrible.

If you go on the internet, you damn well better be ready for people to think you're terrible.

And I am.

No really. Pull the other one.

The over use of the swearing killed it. I get it, you don't like it. but it just seemed like at times you were swearing for the sake of swearing and trying to get a laugh out of it but it just came off as out of place.

I was just thinking about that. Lot's of things i need to work on.



You have the right not to like it. But i have the right to disagree with you. I now it's good.

I "now" it needs more work, the first couple things you do will always be ****. This is true with everyone and everything.
Keep working.

Excessive use of the F-bomb. Maybe express your anger in more creative ways like the Zero Punctuation guy.

Heh, I've got a review for the game lined up for GL (no-one visits that site I gather, but I just like to write stuff for practice's sake). Don't know if I'll ever get the time to do it, I'm pretty busy nowadays.

Anyhow, to be fair, I didn't finish watching your video review as I found it more annoying than funny. Especially the bit about the "batarang." It just seemed more like you rambling about stuff than an actual review, the kind that's read out from a proof-read, critted and corrected script.

I highly recommend editing the random dude out, too. Also, may be a good idea to break up your reviews into sections - eg., when I write a review, I usually label different sections like GAMEPLAY / STORY /GRAPHICS / SUMMARY (not exactly like that, but you get the idea), etc. and then talk about each point respectively.

But then ofc, I'm not a pro or anything, so you might as well ignore me. Like I've said, I only review games for practice (and some of my reviews are pretty terrible, if the replies I've received for my Prototype review here on Massassi are of any indication).

Anyhow, hope this helps. Cheers.

PS. If you want to check some of my reviews, you can get them from my website (NON-FICTION section, link in profile).

False absolute statement.

Name one thing that was perfect the first try.

Jesus?

Or if you prefer a non-religious answer... silly putty!

That was a mistake coming from rubber research, less perfect on first try and more a great accident.