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Upside-down Flirt
2011-04-28, 6:13 AM #1
So I address the letter to you

So tired of prose, it's time to try verse
The form's not so new
But it's very diverse

I write about you
About the curves of your hips
As they come in my view
And the sweetness of lips

So this is my verse
It's not half as bad
If you read in reverse

While you stand on your head
You are wearing a skirt
It's a pleasure to see
An upside-down flirt

I might even catch a glimpse of your knee
幻術
2011-04-28, 10:07 AM #2
Did she slap you?
2011-04-28, 12:02 PM #3
Koobs, that's hilarious! Well done.
2011-04-28, 1:39 PM #4
it does work in reverse :cool:
2011-04-28, 3:49 PM #5
Knee your of glimpse a catch even might I?

I don't get it.
2011-04-28, 5:18 PM #6
Read it backwards line by line, JM, not word by word.

Even then, though, "It's a pleasure to see/And are wearing a skirt" doesn't make sense...
Looks like we're not going down after all, so nevermind.
2011-04-28, 8:08 PM #7
Poorly executed.
2011-04-28, 8:14 PM #8
Originally posted by JM:
Poorly executed.



tough crowd
2011-04-29, 2:47 AM #9
Haha! Yeah, "And are wearing a skirt" should've been "You are wearing a skirt" for it work better. Anywayz, thanks for reading, as always! :)
幻術

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