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Legend of the Super Jedi
2000-11-18, 8:53 AM #1
(Note: this story is based on Dragonball in a Star Wars theme. The storyline is not the same, just a few things, those who know Dragonball will recognize the part, happy writig).

A very long time ago in a strange and mysterious galaxy, a legend is born...

Legend of the Super Jedi
For 5000 years the Jedi in the galaxy were
able to supress the Dark Side, but a new time has arrived. A time of new and stronger powers.

The Jedi aren't able to supress the Dark Side anymore, it's growing stronger and bigger. Planet after planet is taken over by evil powers.

In these dark times the Jedi still see a little bright licht, it's almost time for the legend, the legend which is born every 5000 years. But some don't see it that good, it is just a legend...

[This message has been edited by Sven Solo (edited November 18, 2000).]
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-11-18, 9:20 AM #2
A dark cloud lies over the town. the old man looks at the hills on the North,'You must go now, the Evil is coming!' He turns to the woman,'GO!' 'I can't leave you here!' 'There is nothing here for you anymore, you must go and bring it to a save place.' The woman turns around and walks away. The old man nods and looks at the hills again.

A orange glow surrounds the hills. Dark shadows appear above. They are carrying torches. The woman looks at the town once more, she sees the shadows running into the town murdering everybody. She sees her friends die before he eyes. She wants to be there too, she wants to die with her friends, but that's impossible, there is something more important she needs to do.

A few hours later the woman arrives at the cave were she needs to be. She is tired and wants to rest forever, but not yet. She needs to give birth. She is not pregnant, but this is the exact time she needs to be here. She kneels and lies down on the ground.
A green glow appears above her, it shapes around the woman. In goes throught her skin and fills her body. In a last breath a good feeling fills the woman and she slowly disappears. All that's left is a young child.
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-11-27, 12:39 AM #3
[Please stop posting these stupid posts, thx]

[thx for deleting that post]

A dark figure looked out over the town. Another person walks at him. 'We found the old man, my Lord.' 'I am coming.' The dark figure steps into the light, a grey and black face can be seen, the man's wearing a black rope, and a lightsaber hangs on his side.

'This way, Lord Auroww.' Darth Auroww, a tall man, walks to the old man, who is held by two other Siths. 'Tell me you old fool, where is the child!' 'I'm not telling you anything!' 'Speak up, Jedi!' The old man is silent. 'I must know it now, before it's born!' Darth Auroww holds up his hand and makes a fist. The old Jedi looks at Auroww,'You are already dead!'

[This message has been edited by Sven Solo (edited December 08, 2000).]
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-11-27, 4:02 AM #4
'What do you mean, old fool!' A smile appears on the old Jedi's face,'He is already born.' Auroww is stunned,'What, that's impossible, else I should have felt it!' 'I guess you aren't as strong as you tough you were, hehehe.' 'Shut up!' Auroww swings his flat hand at the face of the old Jedi, he hits him right on the face. The man falls on the ground. 'Tell me, where is the child!' The old man spits at Auroww. Auroww is irritated now,'I've had it with you, you are of no use to me!' He grabs his lightsaber, a dark red blade comes out. Auroww swings his saber and in a powerfull blow he cuts the mans head off. Auroww turns around,'Kill everybody and burn the village.' He looks at his aprentice,'come with me, we need to find the woman with the child.'

The rusty spaceship comes out of hyperspace above the dark green planet. 'I've finally arrived.' A beatyful woman with long brown hair in a tale and a brown rope looks at the planet through the window of the spaceship. 'And it's already born, I can feel his great power.' She concentrates even more, suddenly a cold shiver runs over her back,'Oh no, a powerful evil Force is present and it's not far from the Child, I must hurry!' She let's the Force guide her and sends the spaceship into the thick atmosfear. The ship comes out of the clouds and makes a wide turn. It lands on the soft grass near the cave. The boarding ramp opens, the woman leaps out. She looks at the cave,'He's here, I can feel him.' She goes to the cave, suddenly she stops and turns around.
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-11-28, 3:28 AM #5
[From here on the story will be in the past instead of the present [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]]

She looked at the hills,'I sence a powerfull Force, but is it Good, or Evil?' The woman decided not to wait for it and made a run to the the cave.

'What is it, aprentice?' 'I sence a Force behind those hills.' 'Is it a strong one?' The aprentice looked at his Master Auroww,'No.' Auroww looked at the hill,'It has got to be there, somewhere. Let's have a look.' Auroww walked to the hill and looked over it. There down in the valley he saw a spaceship. 'Look Master!' 'I've already seen it Sulrra. We'll check it out.' Auroww walked down the hill.

The woman hided in the cave behind a big rock hoping not to be found. She could feel the Dark Forces, one stronger than the other, but both stronger than her, yet it was her who needed to take care of the Child.
She waited no more and rose to her feet. She looked around and found what she was looking for a passageway deeper into the cave.

'Silrra, search the surroundings for a being!' 'As you wish, Master.' Silrra concentrated and search the surroundings for a Forcesignal. Suddenly he stopped,'I've found one, in that cave, it's a faint one, but it's there.' Auroww looked at the cave. 'Uh?' Silrra said. 'The Forcesignal, it's gone.' 'What?' Auroww was suprissed, he walked faster at the cave. He stopped very suddenly. 'What's wrong Master?' Silra said. 'I know whats going on here, somewhone or something has made a Forcefield here whitch makes it impossible for the Dark Side to scan inside the cave.' His eyes became larger,'The Child, it's here!!!'

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Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-01, 3:02 AM #6
The cave became darker and darker, yet somewhere deep down in the darkness a little light shone. Filling the air with a soft and warm feeling.

Auroww walked into the cave suddenly a cold feeling went through his body...
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-01, 3:18 AM #7
...,'What's this?' 'Master, this place gives me a cold feeling.' 'Aprentice! Don't let this feeling get to you!' Auroww said these words, but at the same time, he was getting colder and colder,'The Light Force is strong here, very strong.' Auroww saw a light far away in the darkness of the cave. Suddenly a bright blue flash lit the cave for a second, a bolt of blue fire crashed into Auroww, he was stunned for a moment. He noticed a woman running past him and his aprentice. He stood up and ran after her,'Stop! That child is mine!'

There they are. the woman said in her self, she picked up the child and made a stuck her arm out with an opened hand, a blue bolt shot out of the handpalm into the darkness at the dark figures she could feel.
After that she begun to ran, faster and faster. She passed the stunned figures and felt a deep cold Force. One of them yelled, but she was too blinded to hear it, she had to get to her ship!
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-08, 2:32 AM #8
She could feel the Dark Side nearing, but she didn't mind and begun to run even faster. She left the cave into the night. The woman took a little peak behind her, a dark and evil person with a scared face and black clothings ran after her.

Silrra tried to sence the woman,'Master her Forcelevel is low, you can outrun her by far!' After Auroww heard that he begun to run faster.

The woman was terrified, she had to make her escape, the future of the Galaxy lay in her hands. Suddenly the child in her hands opened his eyes, a blue Force came from his body and went into the woman giving her new strenght. The woman felt the Force inside her flowing through her mussles making her run with an incredible speed.

Auroww was stunned and stopped watching his future getting just a bit darker after he saw the woman run into the ship with incredible speed. Almost at the same time the ship took off into the dark sky making his escape run. Auroww fell on his knees,' Sillra, promise me...'


30 years later...

Kilra walked over the boarding ramp into the spacesations hallway. The rusty plating made it impossible to perdict the strongness of the station, which would probebly be not that strong. She had just come from her last training with Jedi-master Doural. She went to see her family after 6 years of intensive training, but first she had to legilize her ship at the station before she could fly on to the planet. A officer walked by, his uniform was dirty and had teared holes in it. He just came from a fight with the bartender and a customer, so Kilra had noticed when whe walked into the bar. 'Ah there you are Jedi Kilra, I've been looking for you, you got the papers?' 'Ah, Olaka, nice to see you again, and yes here are the papers, make it quick I want to see my family.' 'No problemo, I'll go to it at once.' Commander Olaka walked away with the papers. Kilra sat down at a table and ordered a drink. She didn't feel comfortable, there was something, something in the future. No stop think about that, concentrate on the present.
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-14, 10:10 PM #9
'Well, your signnumber of your ship checks out,' Olaka said when he got back. Kilra looked up at him,'Ok, time to go.' 'What your leaving already?' 'Sure, I haven't seen my family and friends for a long time.' 'Your right, I guess I'll see you back in a couple of days?' 'You'll be seeing me back in a couple of hours, hehe. I have some unfinished business to attend to on this station.' 'I see,' Olaka said a bit suprised. Kilra stood up and grabbed her drink, she drunk it up and put it back on the table. 'Gotta go.' Olaka waved at her as she walked away.

She got back in her ship and flew it out of the dockingramps and into the atmosfeer of the planet. The ship landed near a house on a grassfield. The boardingramp opened with a hiss. Kilra walked out of the ship onto the grass. She kneeled down and smelled the green grass. A little wind played with her hear. A warm feeling went through her body. Home at last.
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-14, 10:19 PM #10
The door of the house swung open. A woman came running out. 'MOM!!' Kilra said. The to women embrassed eachother. And older man also walked out the house. 'DAD!!' Kilra embrassed her father. Some children came running out the house. 'My little brothers and sisters.' A perfect moment was there when all the love of the family stood together. Then suddenly Kilra stood up and warm feeling entered her body. It was a good kind of Forcefeeling.
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...
2000-12-17, 4:10 AM #11
She looked up, a man came walking out of the house, his presence was strong. Kilra walked over to him, 'Well, well, what are you doing here?' said Kilra 'Just passing by, I was on my way to town when I felt your presence, I had to see you.' 'Looks like your still on the good side, Garin.' 'Well I try to keep it that way.' 'Have you already considered Jedi training? You would make a powerfull Jedi.' 'Nope, I don't like that save the galaxy stuff, I have my own problems. Not that I don't care about the galaxy.' Kilra looked at Garin, He's hiding something, he is hiding it from his birth. I sence I'm about to know what. Suddenly a loud noise of engines came their way.

The grass was torn out of the ground as the speeders passed the field. A big man with spikes on his back looked in front of him at the house which became bigger and bigger, 'Fellas, there he is. Kill Garin!!'
Choose life. Choose a job. Choose sitting on a couch watching spirit crushing game shows, stuffing junk food into your mouth...
But why would I do a thing like that, i chose not to choose this life.
I chose the Star Wars life...

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