hello, I am releasing a level called The Bounty Hunter and I need ideas for characters and a story line for the next lvls in the the series, so I hope you good Massassians will put together a good story. (any stupid posts will be ignored) in the game the time period is 1 year before Star Wars:The Empire Strikes Back, so now its before A New Hope, also Kneesha (the bounty hunter) is 33 so lets start of where shes 13 and has just graduated from acadamy, and is trying to get back to her home planet after she has found out the imperials are trying to capture it.....
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Kneesha:Tanner, give me a ship, or lend me one, its urgent!!

Tanner:Get a life Slimo, you Trandoshan freaks should be wiped out

Kneesha:I have no time to waste with you, if you don't feel like being nice, we will do it the hard way!!

Tanner:Hahaha, you wouldn't dare, you wouldn't stand a chance, you will be killed in an instant, its illegal for a Trandoshan to have power!!

Kneesha:It will change!! /raises gun at Tanner/

Trooper:Stop him!!

Kneesha:huh, who the..

Tanner:Get him boys!!

Kneesha:arrggg

/kneesha runs out the bar and down the street, only to be chased by 2 stormtroopers!!/

Kneesha:I should of guessed that Tanner was behind all this!!

Trooper:Sir we've lost him, we will begin to search the area..

/as troopers walk away kneesha appears in a trash can/

Kneesha:When I get my hands on Tanner he will regret this!!

/kneesha heads for the main hanger where Tanner was going....../

/Tanner gets on ship/

"The Bounty Hunter" is not very original. Make it something interesting, i.e. "Stormtrooper: Vengeance" (by Tee) or "Birth of a Mercenary" (by AKPiggot).

[edit] Also, stormtrooper's don't say "get 'em, boys," or anything like that. I think that the story doesn't follow Star Wars. Trandos live to be 200 or so, they brobably wouldn't graduate at 13. [/edit]
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[This message has been edited by Xizor42 (edited March 06, 2001).]

first off, Tanner shouts 'Get em boys' and secondly the Title does need some work I agree, any ideas for a title?