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I have actualy started writing a book, I don't persay fancy myself a very good writer, thats the critics job. But I thought you all might like a little excert. This in particular is from chapter three. Feel free to add on to the story, this was ment to be continued, although I have already written up to chapter 5 of my book. I am uncertain if I will be able to get a deal with Lucas Film and a good publisher or not, but it's worth a try. And even if I don't, I'll have the satisfaction of writing my own novel.
Anyway please read and enjoy! Be sure to continue the story along nicely, no joking around heh =). Also pardon my grammar, it's late in the evening.
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The fumes flowing from the exaust vents made Kip breathe heavily as he tried to swollow the thick gummy air. He stepped off the boarding ramp of his ship and proceded into the dingy and dirty Imperial Manufactering plant.
The smell of toxins was in the air, Kip didn't know if he would find the plans to the new assassin droids here, or if they would be any help in destroying them, but what he did know is that he served the Republic, and he would do whatever it took to ensure it's safety.
Kip easily fooled the guards and was granted access to the main offices of the complex. He watched with intent as assault ships and blaster rifles were assembled in various wings of the building. He traveled through it's endless corridoors and production bays until he found the vast and open engineering lab where the new droids were being produced.
A large catwalk crossed a pit in the center of the room, the pit dropped down concealing a vat of hot, boiling led, used to mold the new droids' armor.
A processing arm emerged from the hot liquid, clasping to a newly forged assasin droid. The led quickly hardened into durasteal, which was only known to be penitrable by the blade of a light saber.
Kip sensed danger as he entered, he triversed the large area slowly as not to alarm any of the engineers to his presence. The instituionalized Imperials worked steadily affixing varios components to the newly created droid, they worked with deadly presicion as they completed yet another silent, mindless assassin.
Kip could not help from thinking to himself, "The Empire, it never dies, always rebuilt, always returning stronger than before.. will it ever end?"
Kip sense of the Dark Side increased, he probed the room with his mind, searching for the hidden darkness.
"You should not have come, young Jedi" a voice from the shadows blaired with an uncanny demenior.
Kip hurled around to see Gual Moper arise from the shadows, Gaul was the Sith Master, who had taken the Emperor's place three years before.
With a Snap Hiss Kip ignighted his glowing yellowish, red light saber. Gual quickly ignighted his solid blue saber, a design which Kip had never witnessed before.
"Do you really think your febal skills are any match for me, boy?" Gual taunted at Kip.
Lunging forward, Kip took the first swing, and quickly shredded a sleeve of Gual's cloak, purposly avoiding his arm to show his streangth and ability.
"Impressive, boy. But you, as many others in the past do not truely understand the power of the dark side"
With the raise of Gual's hand, a bright light like fire was released, as Force Destruction rained on Kip, maining him. Kip regained his balance, ready to face his unltimate fate...
[This message has been edited by MastaX (edited January 08, 2000).]
I have actualy started writing a book, I don't persay fancy myself a very good writer, thats the critics job. But I thought you all might like a little excert. This in particular is from chapter three. Feel free to add on to the story, this was ment to be continued, although I have already written up to chapter 5 of my book. I am uncertain if I will be able to get a deal with Lucas Film and a good publisher or not, but it's worth a try. And even if I don't, I'll have the satisfaction of writing my own novel.
Anyway please read and enjoy! Be sure to continue the story along nicely, no joking around heh =). Also pardon my grammar, it's late in the evening.
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The fumes flowing from the exaust vents made Kip breathe heavily as he tried to swollow the thick gummy air. He stepped off the boarding ramp of his ship and proceded into the dingy and dirty Imperial Manufactering plant.
The smell of toxins was in the air, Kip didn't know if he would find the plans to the new assassin droids here, or if they would be any help in destroying them, but what he did know is that he served the Republic, and he would do whatever it took to ensure it's safety.
Kip easily fooled the guards and was granted access to the main offices of the complex. He watched with intent as assault ships and blaster rifles were assembled in various wings of the building. He traveled through it's endless corridoors and production bays until he found the vast and open engineering lab where the new droids were being produced.
A large catwalk crossed a pit in the center of the room, the pit dropped down concealing a vat of hot, boiling led, used to mold the new droids' armor.
A processing arm emerged from the hot liquid, clasping to a newly forged assasin droid. The led quickly hardened into durasteal, which was only known to be penitrable by the blade of a light saber.
Kip sensed danger as he entered, he triversed the large area slowly as not to alarm any of the engineers to his presence. The instituionalized Imperials worked steadily affixing varios components to the newly created droid, they worked with deadly presicion as they completed yet another silent, mindless assassin.
Kip could not help from thinking to himself, "The Empire, it never dies, always rebuilt, always returning stronger than before.. will it ever end?"
Kip sense of the Dark Side increased, he probed the room with his mind, searching for the hidden darkness.
"You should not have come, young Jedi" a voice from the shadows blaired with an uncanny demenior.
Kip hurled around to see Gual Moper arise from the shadows, Gaul was the Sith Master, who had taken the Emperor's place three years before.
With a Snap Hiss Kip ignighted his glowing yellowish, red light saber. Gual quickly ignighted his solid blue saber, a design which Kip had never witnessed before.
"Do you really think your febal skills are any match for me, boy?" Gual taunted at Kip.
Lunging forward, Kip took the first swing, and quickly shredded a sleeve of Gual's cloak, purposly avoiding his arm to show his streangth and ability.
"Impressive, boy. But you, as many others in the past do not truely understand the power of the dark side"
With the raise of Gual's hand, a bright light like fire was released, as Force Destruction rained on Kip, maining him. Kip regained his balance, ready to face his unltimate fate...
[This message has been edited by MastaX (edited January 08, 2000).]
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