I am working on a new MotS level titled, "The Quest." However, I have yet to get the story beyond the opening scene. So I would like to ask for the help of all Massassians in writing the story for "The Quest." Below I'll set the stage, and then you guys/gals can let loose on it. Please try to keep it true to the Star Wars Universe. Have fun.

"THE QUEST"

[A freighter flies twoards a blu-ish planet.
The freighter then heads for a small vally surrounded by cliffs. The vally has a water fall at one end, fed by a river above the cliffs. In an another corner of the vally, there is a large building built into the rock cliff. The freighter flies over head, looking to land somewhere near by.
Out of the house comes a young man, about 18 years old, named Johck Akpen. He looks up at the passing freighter, with excitment on this face.]
Johck: "Father! The Trader ship is here!"

[Note: The idea here is something happens to Johck that sends him on a Quest of some sort, thus the title. Good luck]

[A freighter flies twoards a blu-ish planet.
The freighter then heads for a small vally surrounded by cliffs. The vally has a water fall at one end, fed by a river above the cliffs. In an another corner of the vally, there is a large building built into the rock cliff. The freighter flies over head, looking to land somewhere near by. It slowly lowers itself and lands next to a similarly shaped starship.
Out of the house comes a young man, about 18 years old, named Johck Akpen. He looks up at the passing freighter, with a slightly puzzled frown on his face.]
Johck: "Father! Uhh...another Trader ship is here!"
[A freighter flies twoards a blu-ish planet.
The freighter then heads for a small vally surrounded by cliffs. The vally has a water fall at one end, fed by a river above the cliffs. In an another corner of the vally, there is a large building built into the rock cliff. The freighter flies over head, looking to land somewhere near by. It heads for a pair of already landed freighters.
Out of the house comes a young man, about 18 years old, named Johck Akpen. He looks up at the passing freighter, with an annoyed look on his face.]
Johck: "This is just getting silly! We'll never get the ruts out of the croquet pitch. I must find some way to get rid of these freighters before the Croquet League has to be cancelled..."

Well, Noble, sounds like a good start. Here's my ideas for what to do next.

Hearing the shout from his son, Mr. Akpen (?) hurries outside just in time to see the freiter land a little ways out infront of his home. "Johck..." He says sternly, "Get my blaster, we may nead it." No soon has young Akpen returned with his fathers weapon than the ramp lowers on the freiter and a hooded figure steps down. Slowly walking towards the house, with Father Akpen's blaster pointed at his face, a voice comes forth from beneath the hood. "My name is Kyle Katarn..."

Something like that. hope that helps.

Johck: "Well Mr so-called Katarn - if that's really your name! - we'd like to know what you're doing ruining our croquet pitch with all these freighters!"

Kyle Katarn: "Johck, I have come to warn you - I have sensed it with the Force. Great catastrophies. Whole croquet leagues to be cancelled. Many pitches, laid in terrible wreck. These things I have seen. And I have come to warn you. To give you time to prepare a counter. For not all things will come to pass if you act, and act now."

Johck: "WHAT?!?!? You've just made those things come to pass by landing all those freighters there!"

Kyle Katarn: *Looks behind him* "Ahh..."

Johck's Father: "Kid's got a point, mister."

Kyle Katarn: "Um, yes. The force has a way of making you look a complete prat sometimes. Anyway, let's pretend you haven't seen the obvious and continue shall we? You must go to, errr, some planet, and find a, umm, man. Yes, a man! And this man will be, err, pretty non-descript really, sort of average height, dark hair, y'know? And this man will, err..."

Johck: "You're making this up as you go along aren't you? Listen, you. I'm going to find a way to get your ships off this planet, even if it means travelling to distant planets, completing some ludicrous quest to find the knowledge, learning the force as I go along and returning for a final showdown with you! Okay?!?"

Kyle Katarn: "Err, yup, that sounds good. I'll...just wait here then? With all my ships?"

Johck: "You do that"

*And so Johck strides up the hill, away from the house, his father and Kyle. Here ends the first cutscene...*

Yay! Final Showdown with Kyle as the enemy!!!