If you don't like rap please leave.

If you don't mind, can ya judge my tracks? I know I can do better but I'd like your opinions again.

Thanks.

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My Tracks

derailing the subway - intro is trying WAY to hard to be hella-gangster. Even if you are, it's way too over-done and cliche. REMIX REMIX AFSDKFJAS:LKFJ I hate it when emcees scream that (especially when it's not). Other than that, it's actually quite catchy. N/m, I got past that first break. The vocals are too over-powered by that reversed string sample.

I listened to the other 3 tracks, but can only gave identical commentary. I'm curious, though, can you write anything besides battle tracks? I've yet to meet someone making themselves purely on emcee battles, although I don't doubt it can be done. Excercising lyrical creativity will help improve your flow (trust me). I do live emcee for DnB djs around here occasionally, so I'm not just some punk making up some bs.