Well, I've been writing lyrics for a quite a while, and recently there's been something I've been working on and I thought I'd record it and let others tell me if I suck at singing or not. I put it to a simple (but repetative) chord progression. Hopefully I'll be able to make something better (or if someone with guitar skills wants to help...).

It's just a 44 second clip, by the way.

Razors

[Edit: I've updated the file, making the vocals louder, because some people were complaining. Oh, and I apologize for the poor recording quality...]

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All the prism in the world couldn't make hue.

[This message has been edited by Vincent Valentine (edited April 06, 2004).]

I can only hear alittle part of the song...

A little part? What do you mean?

Oh, and if anyone is interested, which I know they're not...

A silent siren
Unknowing temptress bids me come
I want to touch her
But she doesn't even know of lust

My hands are razors
My hands are razors on her skin
I leave her bleeding
Bleeding, dying for my sin

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All the prism in the world couldn't make hue.

I mean the song link is broken the whole thing doesn't play...

Try again, I had to delete it to reupload it earlier.

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All the prism in the world couldn't make hue.

You need to project your voice more, it seems more like you're talking then singing in the clip.

Hmm, nice.

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<landfish> FastGamerr > Satan

Moonspell-ish whispering would be cooler.