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I could use some help

2004-09-27, 7:27 PM #1

Zloc_Vergo

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well, since i am bored out of my freaking mind, i decided to write a song. I'm calling it MORE MORE MORPHINE, and i plan for it to be about a girlfriend or someone really close to you like that breaking your heart or something... i think i've got the chorus or something worked out and i think it will go something like:

give me more more morphine to help the pain,
give me more more morphine, I think i'm goin' insane

all help will be appreciated, so if you could help me with this, i'd like that.

thanks

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2004-09-28, 8:47 AM #2

dry gear the frog

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Posts: 1,533

What do you need help with? Coming up with chords?
What kind of song are you trying to make?

It's not the side effects of cocaine, so then I'm thinking that it must be love

2004-09-28, 9:21 AM #3

Wuss

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My recommendation is that you don't rhyme "pain" with "insane;" it's been done before.

Check out Rhymezone.com.