Guarantee Me

Look into my eyes!
Fill my pupils up with lies!

Look into my eyes!
I see through your disguise!

Look into my eyes!
Don't even try to compromise!

Look into my eyes!
This is where reality thrives.

In my eyes,
Where we all live our lives
and we prepare to die
In my eyes.

The human brain can overheat
and the heart can often skip a beat
But I can always guarantee
That you'll never find a fallacy
Or a lie to any such degree
In that which you can see

In my eyes,
Where we all live our lives
and we prepare to die
In my eyes.

Look onto my hands!
Follow all of my commands!

Look onto my hands!
Conquer all the greatest lands!

Look onto my hands!
Collect for me the holy sands!

Look onto my hands!
These are all the kings demands!

In my hands,
Where my life withstands
all the death that expands
In my hands.

...

In my hands,
Where I cover my eyes
And I accept the lies...

Of my life.

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I cant say much about the subject material because.... I dont like. But you're quite good at rhyming and rhyme schemes. This doesn't always translate into a good song, but it does make it easier to memorize, especially for an audience.

brass monkey

funky monkey

Is this song about a guy who told his parents he was doing his homework when he was actually playin videogames?

Thrawn [Numbarz], that is not even close :p

It totally is

...not. Stop being stupid :p

I like it, it rhymes quite nicely, but I'll have to agree with thrawny about the subject matter, it just sounds like video games to me.

If you have your eyes you can see through all the phoney people. You can tell if someone is telling a lie if they look you straight in the eyes. Sight in an important sense.

The other senses and things are nice to have, but they aren't as important as sight.

On the other 'hand' (LAWL) your hands are used to command people. A persons hand movements can intimidate people. You can easily control people with your motions.

When you bring your two most important senses together, it doesn't work. If your hands are covering your eyes, you suddenly can't see through phoney people, you can't tell if someone is telling a lie. You also can't command people when your hands are over your face now can you?

You can see through lies or you can command an army, but you can't do both. If you could you'd be very powerful.