This isn't exactly how I want it to sound yet, but I wanna know what you guys think of my attempt at rap-type poetry. I've gotten into it since Dj-Yoshi introduced me to the genre... whatever that genre is...
Anyway, lyrics:
Suggestions?
Anyway, lyrics:
Quote:
Demons have defied me, now wide eyed they don’t sleep
Angels fear my footsteps and fly headlong into the deep
In my wake lie fiends and multi-legged creatures creep
I’m grave robbing, into my veins dead poet’s blood seeps
Growing a garden of words ripe for spring crop and reap
Followers flock and rock back and forth to the beat like sheep
This is what souls have been needing.
The feeling you get is your spirit feeding.
The music is muted that sound is your heart beating.
1000 voices now chime out my word’s, they’re repeating
St. Peter shut the **** up, that’s my fist you’re greeting
Angels fear my footsteps and fly headlong into the deep
In my wake lie fiends and multi-legged creatures creep
I’m grave robbing, into my veins dead poet’s blood seeps
Growing a garden of words ripe for spring crop and reap
Followers flock and rock back and forth to the beat like sheep
This is what souls have been needing.
The feeling you get is your spirit feeding.
The music is muted that sound is your heart beating.
1000 voices now chime out my word’s, they’re repeating
St. Peter shut the **** up, that’s my fist you’re greeting
Suggestions?
ᵗʰᵉᵇˢᵍ๒ᵍᵐᵃᶥᶫ∙ᶜᵒᵐ
ᴸᶥᵛᵉ ᴼᵑ ᴬᵈᵃᵐ
ᴸᶥᵛᵉ ᴼᵑ ᴬᵈᵃᵐ