Yes, I know I've had some pretty horrible songs showcased here before. But I think/hope I'm getting better. I'd really appreciate any feedback on it:

https://mywebspace.wisc.edu/vandeweghe/web/closemyeyes.mp3

You need to up the Master Volume by about 5 dB.

It's a really great chill song. I'm curious as to what you're recording the acoustic guitar with, it sounds really muted. The piano parts sound great. The drums sounded really fake. I don't know how to help that one, especially if your choice of drum samples is really limited.

In some parts, the bass can be overpowering. Some EQing on that will still let you feel the bass without it being overwhelming. This was right before the change in the song.