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A Song I Wrote.
2006-06-25, 9:30 AM #1
This is a song I wrote yesterday in about 30 minutes, it kinda came to me. Tell me what you think. And thanks to Wolfy for hosting it for me.

http://jrh3k5.net/misc/HereComesReality.mp3

Quote:
This is going to be tougher
Than we first imagined
All those joys and dreamy hopes
Seem so far away.

All this time we thought we had things
Worked out to a tee
But now we see the finished picture
Here comes reality.

Because it’s all a dream when you’re having fun
Living life from day to day
Then all of a sudden, you’re no longer young
And life is slipping away

Just when life could get no better
Things just went all bad
The love we had is shared no more
And now we’re all alone.

I could try and fix things up
But do you want me to
Cuz now I see what we’ve become
I don’t know what to do

Because it’s all a dream when you’re having fun
Living life from day to day
Then all of a sudden, you’re no longer young
And life is slipping away
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2006-06-25, 1:38 PM #2
Not bad, I like how it's sang, it'd be awesome with music, I'd imagine.
2006-06-28, 3:43 PM #3
Does anyone else have any comments? :ninja:
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2006-06-29, 1:06 PM #4
The melody reminded me of Mary Poppins mixed with some sketch Dark Ages Christian Hymn. You have a good voice.
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