I had to write an Auto-Biographical screenplay for Creative Writing. I think I'm going to make it into a Flash movie in the future, but it's a screenplay for now.

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The following link contains some strong language, and may not be suitable for some massassians. I was told that if I gave a disclaimer, it'd be ok. I'll take it down if an op wants.

If I Could Dance...

JediKirby

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Epic: Episode I TC, Epic: Podracing Mod MP/SP, Epic: Starbattles Mod MP/SP

I liked it a lot... great job.

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..."And I think Mr. Frodo, I do understand, I know now. The folk in those stories had lots of chances of turning back, only they didnt. They kept going. Because they were holding on to something. That theres some good in this world, and its worth fighting for." -Samwise "The Brave" Gamgee

Thanks, But I need some critisicm... anyone?

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Epic: Episode I TC, Epic: Podracing Mod MP/SP, Epic: Starbattles Mod MP/SP

Oh come on people, it isn't that bad!


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Epic: Episode I TC, Epic: Podracing Mod MP/SP, Epic: Starbattles Mod MP/SP

The Silence Plaugues Us.

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Epic: Episode I TC, Epic: Podracing Mod MP/SP, Epic: Starbattles Mod MP/SP

It's brilliant.

Only problems are "are" should be "area" I think. You might want to have a more dramatic ending, it seems anti-climatic.

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~ BV

It's not meant to be a build up. It's meant to show that there is no happy, or sad ending. It just ends.

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Epic: Episode I TC, Epic: Podracing Mod MP/SP, Epic: Starbattles Mod MP/SP

If you need to explain that, then there is something you need to fix in your screenplay. You have to convey that to the audience.

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"The future is not determined by a throw of the dice, but is determined by the conscious decisions of you and me."
I am addicted to ellipses!!! AHHH!!! ...

Read the VO at the end... That's explenation enough.

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