http://www.sestus.net/comique.swf

I want to make a series. I lack the motivation.

It doesn't work. I get a broken Quicktime image.

Zell: That means that you somehow allowed Quicktime to be associated with Flash files.

Gris: the first page really could use some panels to help steer the user in the right direction. I wasn't quite sure where to start reading from.

More illustrations would also give the reader the incentive to continue reading. Pages 2 & 3 are almost pure text! Add color, anything, to catch the reader's eye!

I think you picked a good topic to mine comic material from; now you just need to mingle it with some artwork.

Some humble feedback.

So it's a comic?

like he said it seems alittle sloppy and unorgnaized. I'm too lazy to read.

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On a Swedish chainsaw: "Do not attempt to stop chain with your hands or genitals."
Immorality- 1 Cor. 6:18, 2 Tim. 2:22
Impure thoughts- Col. 3:2, Phil. 4:8
Alcohol- Eph. 5:18, Prov. 20:1
Anger- Gal. 5:22, Porv. 20:3
Pride- 1 Peter 5:5, Dan. 4:37
Worry- 1 Peter 5:7, Phil. 4:7-6
speech- James 1:26, Eph. 4:29-5:2

I'll make it mroe organized. And that isn't a series about ESPACEmod, it's about life, gaming, everthing.

I sadly remember that day you found your HL cd, and then downloaded a lifetime of mods....

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<Ishionu> haha, if theres one more thing more pathetic then imaginary girlfriends its imaginary girls you cant get to go out with you ;P

I updated it.

Better!

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Call me Vedder.
Author of: A Pirate's Tale (Mots SP)
APT homepage
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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
<phantom> They're a bunch of socially inadequate <beep> whores who have little or no lives.

Heh heh! Nice. I never knew you were blue.

It's thanks to a carefully selected shmorgasborrrd of racial mixing.

Dr. Mengele would be proud.

In fact, here is a cherished family picture.



*sniff* That was the last time I saw them structurally intact.

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HAHAHAHAHA! I actually laughed out loud at that. That's a rare occurrence. Thanks, Gris.

hehe

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<Ishionu> haha, if theres one more thing more pathetic then imaginary girlfriends its imaginary girls you cant get to go out with you ;P

But what I neglected to show you was this:



*sobs uncontrollably*

After my parents heroically blew their tomato bodies to pieces with their natural self destructing abilities (thereby obliterating the metal assassin), I became an intergalactic crime fighter and floor mopper. Thanks ma and pa!

[This message has been edited by Lord_Grismath (edited July 17, 2003).]