Yes, as you can see, I've taken another try at editing again. Yay, I get to torture you all!
I'd like to know any suggestions of yours, and I'd like to point out the problems I already am aware of: The dark spots are shading errors that I'm currently fixing, so anything besides that, feel free to tell me. Thanks.
(In Case you didn't realize, this is a Custom Gundam of my own design, not a transformer. Constructive criticism, please, although a bit of gettin slapped around isn't bad.)
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I carry the heavy burden of immortality. This curse forces to watch as all others age and die, while I stay exactly the same...
I carry the heavy burden of immortality. This curse forces me to watch as my friends, family and all others age and die, while I stay exactly the same...