I released my first JKII map, and since the upload function is broken I figured I would post it here.

Escape from Takron-Galtos is a pretty simple single player map (actually 4 maps) for JKII, I have to admit it starts off pretty rough as this is my first and I was learning the tools as I went along, but hopefully someone will enjoy it.

http://bsr.cofrfps.com/galtos/ for Screenshots, walkthrough and download.

Hmmm the screenshots looks promising... I'll have to give it a try.

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[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited December 28, 2003).]

A little simple, but it looks ok.

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Put some clothing on. No shirt, no service.

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There's a bug... if you kill all the stormies in the beginning with lightning, you can't escape your cell.

And I don't think Kyle shou;d even have lightning on the first level... that would solve the problem nicely...

The story needa a little work I think, but I like what I've played so far! Good job!

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[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited December 28, 2003).]

"There's a bug... if you kill all the stormies in the beginning with lightning, you can't escape your cell."

Darn, never thought of that.

"No shirt, no service."

Hey now, let't not make this personal.



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maybe another day. I dont really want to download a 8 meg download with a 56k. Looks good though

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I finished playing this yesterday, I thought it was very good, especially starting from level 2 (as you said you were getting better...)

Suggestions:

• Take out the Raven's Claw in the first level. It made me think I had to get there.
• As I said before, don't give Kyle lightning... have him get it on the second or third level.
• In the fourth level, where you have to jump across the chasm as pictured in the main menu... I could never make hte jump from the tram thing to the battery thing, the rafter above sometimes got in my way, other times I just couln't jump far enough... I suggest movinng the battery thing closer. [Edit: Whoops! I just read your walkthrough and realized I was doing it wrong! Lol, I never thought about doing it THAT way...] [Edit 2: I read it more closely... I never say a second cart. At all. You might want to look into that...]
• The story is lacking... maybe you could spice it up by changing it from Kyle and Lando to some random Jedi and his friend...I find Kyle is very often overused, a new character is always welcomed however! I liked the cutscenes that you did, using the original voices... oh, and you need something in there to explain the clones... (I'm not gonna name who is being cloned, I wanna keep it a surprise for those who haven't played. ) Why are the imperials doing this? How did they manage to get a genetic sample? A convo cutsceen (yes you'd have to get voice actore ^_^) would work well to convey this information.
• Some places you have 4 or even 5 shadowtroopers at once! I believe the most at any point should be 3... I suggest you remove some of the shadowtroopers, I thought there were too many in the big pit level...

Of course I'm just nit picking. Your levels ere fun to play, and the part at the end where Kyle take a second out of his time to fire on the hanger was neat...

And as I always say, it's your levels, not mine, I have no business telling you how to make them, so don't feel obligated to make my requested tweaks!

But maybe you can touch this up for a final, formal release when it's submitted to levels@massassi.net?

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[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited December 28, 2003).]

[This message has been edited by The_Mega_ZZTer (edited October 12, 2003).]

...O.o

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hmmm. dunno what that means, Omicron... must be some admin conspiracy to supress a certain word.


Perhaps it's...

'painted'?


no? then um... how about 'four'


dang... well, is it 'pop', 'pencil', 'upper', 'slow', 'dendrite'?


dang We'll never figure it out

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It's his signature saberopus.

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i'd sell my soul, my self esteem
a dollar at a time
for just one chance, one kiss, one taste,
of you, my Magdalena

Thanks for taking the time to type that up Mega. I just fixed a few of the things you mentioned, especially the cart not showing up, and posted a version 1.1 update.

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Massassi's Files Upload is back up! Make sure to submit this now!

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[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited December 28, 2003).]

You got an 8.25 from Map-Review.com.
EXCELLENT. Keep on mapping!!

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I was actually trying to highlight the fact that the date it cites is two months from now. Whatever.

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Woohoo! Uploading now!

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Muahahahahah! I r teh moderator!

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