I think it is an improvment over my last logo. Don't worry about the lightning being cut off on the right, because there will be a border.

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once again, it's lacking philosophical boldness.


It's better, less busy. The lightning is a tad cartoony.

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I'd say the lightning on the upper right top is it's weakness, although it's kind of hard to fix. I might do the lightning layer over and make it even less busy.

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The lightning is cut off on the left.

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I know, but it's okey because I'm gonna have a border arond it. In other words, it will look like the bolt is really a lot longer.

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Okey... there's WAY too much lightning... now to change that.

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Looks much better than the last one.

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Alright, here's the final thing:


Edit: the mod part is in caps now.
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[This message has been edited by Mystic0 (edited October 23, 2003).]

Looks better than the forst, easier to read

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[This message has been edited by Gebohq (edited December 28, 2003).]

It gets my seal of approval.

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Looks the same to me, or am I just not looking hard enough?

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The first one is WAY to busy and random on the lightning part. Thanks for the support guys

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Advice from a graphic designer...less is more. Sure the eye candy is nice I'll give you that, but as a whole the piece needs some work. The transition from the R into the M is a great idea but then Mod is in lower case and kinda breaks the unity you set up. Keep in mind where youre going to use is also. For a website, the only way youll get it to function is to have a border around it as you bleed to the edge, and this may be my opinion but borders are kinda tacky especially with modern design. Keep at it man, dont feel like you need to show off every possible photoshop technique or filter or whatever youre using and cram it into the logo. This makes the piece feel very busy, to the point of chaos. Again, less is more. I like your aggresiveness, keep working

-S

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[This message has been edited by JEDI-Salvation (edited October 23, 2003).]

Looks a lot better. My only advice would be to make the lightning bolt thinner.