For those of you who heard my song demo in my old thread, I started recording the final version of it. I uploaded part of it to see if I'm going on the right track. I can't tell if my voice sounds okay or not (I've always hated my voice), so I'd like some of your inputs on it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/rexxtrendyunplugged.htm

click on music, then download Demo v.2

EDIT: this song is for my girlfriend...I'm sorry if the lyrics are too mushy for you guys...

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gree gree.

[This message has been edited by Murc XIII (edited October 31, 2003).]

Well, I listened to it. I like the song. And you wanted honesty about your voice, right? Okay. In all honesty, it's certainly not terrible, but you seem to have difficulty with tones or something? I'm not sure. It was a good concept, just work on the singing a bit. And, do me a favor, tell me what you think of MY voice here: http://zebox.com/fademon

Keep it up, the music is very good.

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^^^ what he said

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Kilroy Was Here

Not bad, I like this version better, it seems to have better quality (Unless it's the same one, then I'm just crazy).

I want my lyrics, now.

Also, I think your vocalage could use a bit of work, but it's certainly whiney and cute-enough for a girlfriend thing :-P

JediKirby

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"I was driving along listening to the radio, when Judas Priest comes on. It was 'You've got another thing coming.' All of a sudden, I enter 'VICE CITY RAMAGE MODE' and nearly ran some guy over"
- ]-[ellequin

Thanks for the replies guys.

Halfman - Yeah...I can't seem to get the pitches on when I sing. Which is strange, because I play trombone where I NEED to have a good ear...

I listened to your stuff...I really like your voice. It fits the style very well. I don't know how old you are, but you have a very mature voice (unlike mine that makes me sound like i'm in 5th grade...)


jedikirby - It's the same as the other one...the quality shouldn't be any different. In any case, here are the complete lyrics:

The clouds are chased away.


and every time that I see you
my world is lit up, the clouds are chased away
i want to tell you
I think that I should say

What did I ever do
to deserve to have you
I don't really know but I'm glad
I don't really know but I'm glad
I have you

and every time that I see you
my world is lit up, the clouds are chased away
i want to tell you
I think that I should say

How much I love you
How much I need you
I don't think that words can explain
I don't think that words can explain
this feeling


But wait
just one more time
let me try to explain
when you're gone
all the pain
that I go through

that I go through

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gree gree.

Bump. Anyone else...I'd really like some more input.

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gree gree.

Your girlfriend will like it...But do not become a professional singer.

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"A rend a balgák mentsvára, a zseni átlátja a káoszt."

Well, you've gotten pretty much everything else good 'cept for the vocals. You have great talent and know how to make a good sound for something, just work on your voice and the lyrics more. The lyrics sound sort of corny and somewhat immature.

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