The origional drawing I made with pencil:


And after some PSP colouring:




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Call me Vedder.
Author of: A Pirate's Tale (Mots SP)
APT homepage
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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
<phantom> They're a bunch of socially inadequate <beep> whores who have little or no lives.

I dislike the way the legs are, looks like she's about to fall over.

Also, I'd prefer an other background, this one doesn't fit the color scheme much.

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Map-Review | Digital Core | The Matrix: Unplugged

Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

I chose red for the background because I already had green and blue, thus having a RGB colour scheme. (Not that that really makes sense in a drawing, since red, yellow and blue are the primary colours...)

I tried making it green or blue, but that made it to monotomous. And yellow cursed with her skincolour, so I think I'm going to stick with the red-ish.

The legs are like that, because she's in mid-air. She's jumping towards an enemy.

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Call me Vedder.
Author of: A Pirate's Tale (Mots SP)
APT homepage
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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
<phantom> They're a bunch of socially inadequate <beep> whores who have little or no lives.

Maybe a movement blur then, so it looks like she's jumping, and not falling?

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Map-Review | Digital Core | The Matrix: Unplugged

Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

make her lips a different color, like a normal red.

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The opera, The Sands of Time, lasted only four minutes.

The Kansas, and Colorado State Boards of Education both mandate that children should not be taught, or lead to believe in the theory of evolution, Newton's theory of gravity, or the theory that germs cause disease

Mmm...still doesn't look like she's lurching towards an enemy. The drawing itself is good. I like. Just...she looks like aboug to fall down go splat

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<scribbly handwriting barely resembling name>

I concur, the drawing itself shows a lot of talent but the pose of the figure is terrible.

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June 16 - A night to remember
Ex-Council of 14
Miken
"The problem with America is stupidity. I'm not saying there should be a capital punishment for stupidity, but why don't we just take the safety labels off everything and let the problem solve itself?"

Great shading, good figure.
Suggestions:
• Cut her right leg off at the knee, and stick the rest coming out behind and perpendicular to her left leg. It will look more like she's in an action pose.
• Change that background to either white or some kind of terrain. That current one looks ugly, to be blunt.

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They came to sieze and take whatever they please,
Then all they gave back was death and disease.

Her face looks very manly.

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My signature puts the 'hat' in 'phat'.

Her (especially the Post-CG) eyes lack emotion O_o But overall pretty good.

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"Do... or do not... there is no try"-Yoda

HAHA! She(he?)'s DRUNK!

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Unofficial Level/MOD Concept Rater That No One Really Likes...

"Once upon a time, I asked the clerk where the bathroom was and we were launched into mortal combat...until he shot me."

<(^_^<) (>^_^)>

^^^^^ For JediKirby

HAHA! She(he?)'s DRUNK!

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Unofficial Level/MOD Concept Rater That No One Really Likes...

"Once upon a time, I asked the clerk where the bathroom was and we were launched into mortal combat...until he shot me."

<(^_^<) (>^_^)>

^^^^^ For JediKirby

Something about that eye...

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My first appearence on Massassi:
http://forums.massassi.net/html/Forum17/HTML/003329.html