Tell my how much my poetry (more like lyrics) sucks:
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Fearing if too much I say
The world will fall apart
Fearing if I slip today
The world will break my heart
A secret lust
A hidden fire
Kettled, fettered, straining
A fragile jar
A broken lid
Holding back, containing
Fearing if I take one step
The causeway will collapse
Fearing if I take one breath
The air will turn to black
If all was gone
Except for one
Would the world grow dark?
Would it fall
Gradually
Or die right from the start?
Fearing if I leave my home
The return will be long
Fearing if these paths I roam
The way back will be gone
If I try to be
The one I see in me
Will you take my life
To throw away agin?
Fearing if I tried to hard
It all would be in vain
Fearing if I played this part
It might not be the same
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This is for a district poetry contest, and just so they don't see this and think I copied it, it's written by K. Jerrell.
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All the prism in the world couldn't make hue.
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Fearing if too much I say
The world will fall apart
Fearing if I slip today
The world will break my heart
A secret lust
A hidden fire
Kettled, fettered, straining
A fragile jar
A broken lid
Holding back, containing
Fearing if I take one step
The causeway will collapse
Fearing if I take one breath
The air will turn to black
If all was gone
Except for one
Would the world grow dark?
Would it fall
Gradually
Or die right from the start?
Fearing if I leave my home
The return will be long
Fearing if these paths I roam
The way back will be gone
If I try to be
The one I see in me
Will you take my life
To throw away agin?
Fearing if I tried to hard
It all would be in vain
Fearing if I played this part
It might not be the same
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This is for a district poetry contest, and just so they don't see this and think I copied it, it's written by K. Jerrell.
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All the prism in the world couldn't make hue.