Angels

I see darkness coming,
The powerful night.
Fear is growing on me,
A wish for new light.

With pain as its ally,
Darkness is here.
I can feel it coming;
The ending is near.

But when my hope dies,
Along with my soul,
I see a bright light,
Hear revelation's call.

I stand up, I fight,
Ignoring the pain.
I won't let this go,
It won't be in vain.

Before that light saved me,
I feared I would die.
Now I stand here,
With light by my side.

That light is brighter,
Than the sun will ever be.
That light is an angel,
The one who saved me.

The flame in her eyes,
Takes away all my fear.
I know now for certain,
Revelation is near.

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Map-Review | Digital Core | The Matrix: Unplugged

Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

[This message has been edited by gothicX (edited February 21, 2004).]

:| dandy

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<Genki> oh, where are you going, with beards all a waggin, no knowin no knowin what bring dear Mr. Baggins, and Balin, and Dwalin, here down in the vally Ah ha!

unsettling yet well done.

What made you write such a thing?

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"It was a slap in the face, how quickly I was replaced".
"Do you remember telling me you'd hold me until you died (until you died)... well you're still alive"

"I just love it when you stick your tongue in my brain, darling"

if(getThingFlags(source) & 0x8){
  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}

My life.


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Map-Review | Digital Core | The Matrix: Unplugged

Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

Most impressive! I had to read it twice, such a beautiful text it was. I have find it terribly hard to write poems, even in my native tongue, even if writing otherwise is very fluent for me.

Writing poems demand some special understanding, some special feeling and especially a need to do it. You do have all those, and it shows in your text. You are a remarkable artist, all in all, GothiX.

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This day we fight

It reminded me of a poem I wrote a few weeks ago. That things deep. I love it.

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"The Oracle told me I would die with my boots on. I've worn tennis shoes ever since." - Axis

Yeah, it's nice. But I don't like happy poems, so...i'll just adjoin the line 'Death came unexpected.' to the end (only in my head, calm down), which will of course ruin the fluency, rhyme and rhythm of the poem. But that's the nature of death, it is an ending to everything, beauty, strength, even hope. And it's always the same. Death, period.

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"Häb Pfrässe, süsch chlepfts!" - The coolest language in the world (besides Cherokee)

Tight man, props.

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My Tracks

It'd actually make a nice eminem-ish rap .. I just tried it to a relatively moderate beat and it comes out pretty well xP

Very nice writing. The imagery is a plus.

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Sigs are for n00bs.

[1337 FRNDS_Pommy | 3.14 of 14 | » And-GTx2]
Half-Life 2 Central - your definitive source for everything HL2!

Remember kids:

Slit Up.
Not Across.

I didn't create this thread for Rod-Nog wannabe's, thank you very much.

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Map-Review | Digital Core | The Matrix: Unplugged

Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

this is certainly the better of the never-ending poem threads.

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Current Maps | Inclusion | Restless Endeavor

There is a thin line between insanity and stupidity. I am that line.

beautiful, I love it

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One ring to rule them all. One to find them. One ring ti bring them all and in the darkness bind them. In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.