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yet another poem
2004-02-25, 4:25 PM #1
A New World

A robin sang a soft song when the world of man was
gone.
Nothing left but steel bars,
And buildings cut in half,
When the robin sang in a world once ours.

The stillness enveloping,
Soft songs pervading,
Shadows hiding,
The world that once was ours.

The stories were hidden,
The tales forgotten;
History erased to begin anew,
On a world once ours.

Thrown away was the world of man,
Like dust to the wind.
Discarded,
Destroyed by its own hand,
A death of its own creation,
On a world once ours.

The robin sang,
With the world as its stage.
No audience but the flowers and the trees,
And yet it was content.
Content to sing
On a world once ours.

The robin sang as the sun rose,
A sun never again to warm the skin of man.
The shadows receded,
The dawn proceeded;
A dawn on a world now theirs.

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Life is too important to take seriously
-Oscar Wilde
There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
~ Oscar Levant
2004-02-25, 4:47 PM #2
I am in awe...

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Baby Mama's Drama
TAKES HINTS JUST FINE, STILL DOESN'T CARE
2004-02-25, 7:22 PM #3
I like it. It hearkens back to the days of the Cold War, when everybody was convinced that mankind was on the edge of self-annihilation. Which of course we were.

I give it an A-.

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"Well, it could be worse -- it could be windy!" -popular Canadian saying.
So sayest the Writer of Silly Things!
2004-02-25, 8:14 PM #4
yeah, what he said. Very impressive. I like.

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