I hope you like what you see...

[This message has been edited by [SM]Yun (edited March 03, 2004).]

Go with gold, or something. The purple just doesn't work.

I think you should play with the lighting a lot more. Otherwise, I like it.

JediKirby

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I really like the lighting in the first shot.

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I like it very much, but the brown ground texture looks kinda bland to me.

What game that is, BTW? I remember you posting screenshots for your Quake 2 mods, so is it Quake 2?

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i smell the inspiration. keep working on it, 'cause i'm sure it's going to turn out quite well.

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Thanks for the comments! I was looking at the blue lights, and they do look very out of place, this was supposed to be a blue-ish map (Blood Asp's influence), but then I started drifting off into other things. The shots above are only one part of the map (middle).

The map turned out to be a 3 x 3 in hallways. Very curvy and stressful on my compiling time. I actually got all that done while at my friends house on one of his fast computers, which allowed me to actually build and compile the map the way it's supposed to be done. The game is Quake 2, as it is always.

Again, thanks for the comments

Yun



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It looks good so far... as far as textures go, I would say to try a grey/black kinda scuffed/scratched/scruffy kinda metal thing, along the same lines, but black and nasty looking.

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Lighting in the second shot looks all wrong to me, though it might just be the angle. Or me.

I like the purple lights, it gives a nice contrast, as well as that neon look.

I approve.

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The second shot is from under the bridge of the first shot (center of the pic)

The third is on the other end of the big hall? of the first and second shot, facing the opposite direction.

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About the blue(purple) lighting, I'm not really sure what I should do with it, it does look good ingame, but also a bit out of place.

Also, the lighting looks weird in the second picture because it's from directly overhead, I'm considering moving the source to lamp posts or such things.

Yun

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