Poem I wrote, entitled 'Love'


'You see it looming above your head
You have a feeling that you'll be dead
You hope and pray, will you be okay?
The heathens rise, you fear demise
They are blind to your emotion,
they'll end your life with one quick motion.
Your life has been tattered
your strength has been battered..,
the light of your life is slowly fading
your vigilant enemy is swiftly invading.
you can not run, you are consumed
the reign of sorrow has been resumed.'


It's about the repurcussion of losing someone you love, if you didn't understand it.


Edit: P.S. this is my first attempt at composing a poem of any sort..
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[This message has been edited by -Monoxide- (edited March 05, 2004).]

yes...well...good job...6 and 1/2 outta 10 i guess...i'd round that up to seven...

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go find a monkey and just laugh at him if you want to date me

Its a good poem but kinda depressing... love isn't something to be feared... meh... call me stupid.

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Don't be unwise judge me not by my size. You wont believe your eyes watch the xwing rise!

After just losing someone I loved, I must say, that's quite a nice poem.

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Farewell, MaDaVentor. In our hearts, you'll always live on.

I think it's good... I recently Lost some one I loved dearly.

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Thanks for the nice comments guys!

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Beautiful

if(getThingFlags(source) & 0x8){
  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}