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an apology

2004-03-16, 6:56 PM #1

The Mad Hatter

she thinks my flexor's sexy

Posts: 141

His eye shines with friendly light
His voice calm, as summer’s night
His smile warms, as fire to a chill
His laugh like rain on a windowsill

Her eye loves with quiet grace
Her voice soft, as silk and lace
Her smile calls like spring’s warm sun
Her laugh, like life, has just begun

Do you know this He? This She?
Wonder it hard, Can you not see?
The devil is He. The devil is She
More beautiful than ever you be…

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2004-03-17, 12:08 PM #2

Prince Xizor

Xinior Member

Posts: 1,420

Thats really nice. I like it.

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2004-03-17, 12:16 PM #3

Grismath

Registered User

Posts: 5,177

Very good.

Cordially,
Lord Tiberius Grismath
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2004-03-17, 4:25 PM #4

The Mad Hatter

she thinks my flexor's sexy

Posts: 141

Now that I look at it it probably could have been better as a free verse poem, I would have had a lot more flexibility. I may try that and post it later... but at least you can get the general idea through my cliche rhymes and such.

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