I was told to focus my pictures on something. I chose the old barn.








The picture inside the barn is blury because that part of the barn isn't on my property. So I had to stand on my tippy-toes and kind of blindy take pictures.


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[This message has been edited by SAJN_Master (edited March 25, 2004).]

The last pic is probably the best of the lot, even in its bluriness. A better set, but next time try to find some interesting perspectives and/or lighting situations. Good stuff.

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Compositionwise, the ones that my eye likes are the window and the interior tube, and the last one. The rest aren't as interesting and seem a tad generic. Set your camera down and try higher exposure times. Find interesting light (kind of hard in that type of drab weather, I know). The location has potential. Try framing something so that it covers 1/3 or 2/3. Try crouching down. Get some depth in there with something in the foreground and in the background.

Heh, is it that obvious that it's cloudy out?

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I’m not going to die, I’m going to see if I was ever alive. - Spike
It's not your right to decide whether they live or die. They deserve a chance! - Vash
BABIES EVERYWHERE!!!

Get a B&W 36. Your photography is not photography until it conforms to these standards. Thank you, and goodbye.

(I like the one from the tube, and the broken... thing looks good. I just can't stand the color... ish. Photos were meant to be B&W)

JediKirby

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I like the second shot, that rusted thinggy adds to the background, kind of representing the age or condition of it (in my opinion).

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