this is one of my castle type...strange korribian textures alligned...noghri habbitated...chrash with shuttle level






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-thank you man, raly appriciate it

BTW, its work in progres and i didnt did the lighting yet

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-thank you man, raly appriciate it

Great start! Though the inner walls might need some more architectural detail and you might want to break up the floor a bit (uneven it).

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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
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Some lighting might help it.

you need to fix the caps on the archways. the textures aren't aligned. also, i think you have a little too much cloning going on the top part of that castle. you could create some nice shadows if you give some negative space a chance.

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The center staircase on the second floor of the castle leads down to a drop off. This is incredibly bad for flow and makes no sense. The staircases are also much too steep for good gameplay. I realize that you're struggling for space, but you have to plan the scale of things out before you get started.

The ship is very much out of place. How did this ship happen to crash in that crampt corner of this area and still manage to land on all four's? It's also hard to believe that it was able to crash land in such a tight space with so litle damage.

Off to a good start, but it definitely needs some work.

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You're getting a lot better! I'm impressed with your work, considering how young you are. Keep working!

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Crap.

(for the comment from mentatMM) as i were saying, its WiP. So i first alligned te textures nicely to te castle. I am now trying to cut off some edges off the corner in the first screenie. Further. I made a second castle witch is leading to a big deserted rocky place (you think) after you have riden some with a swoop bike. You will acounter a third destroyd academy ship. (the story line is that you are on youre way to a dffrent place) You are thinking that there must be some cannons to destroy the ships. Then you accounter a VERY BIG CASTLE with all kinds off defenses and some reborn_new's to fight back the noghri's. But they lose. Noghri's are taking over the whole place and are planning an attack for another place.

Then, i dont know what to do with the staircase. I just needed something to fill the gaps up. And BTW, i wanted those stairs turn 90 degrees

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-thank you man, raly appriciate it

Uhhhh. Sorry that my mapping abbileties are still bad, but i am only 12 years old


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Hurricane; going around posting "crap" everywhere isn't how we make friends where I come from.

I don't have any friends so I wouldn't know.

Actually, I don't even know what a friend is...

^...and how to be actually funny...

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Look it up in a dictionary.


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Call me Vedder.
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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
<phantom> They're a bunch of socially inadequate <beep> whores who have little or no lives.

Now, whitout starting a topic war.

How does my level looks???

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-thank you man, raly appriciate it

Alright. Rather repetative and cramped, though.

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