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So...
"007...Whats your name"
"The name is bond...James Bond"
"No, i mean your other codename"
"Dont tell this any further. Its need help"

Those beveled sideboards are REALLY freakin deep.

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My signature puts the 'hat' in 'phat'.

Player looks like the size of a 5 year old kid compared to the size of the room. Might want to size it down by 25%.

-- SavageX

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"...and if you don't like that, then you need to be slugged in the face repeatedly, until my hands are soaked in blood. Have a nice day!"
http://www.savagex.net

It was just the meaning of this game. You are a 7 year old kid finding a lightsaber of a dead jedi and is going yo destroy those nasty stormie's

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So...
"007...Whats your name"
"The name is bond...James Bond"
"No, i mean your other codename"
"Dont tell this any further. Its need help"

Let me guess: Those mean stormtroopers are also 7 year old?

I hope this is not your contest map for the SP level competition... I cannot really see a deep and inspiring plot in this one.

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Frozen by ICARUS

I suggest you finish the Egyptian one first, actually. That one looks ten times better than this one..

Anyone who uses such a wallpaper all over the house needs to get his butt kicked. @@

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"Do... or do not... there is no try"-Yoda

yeah, change it to like plain white or something.

btw, even if the player is 7 years old, I think that ceiling is way too tall.

I agree. The egyptian-style map (or Ord Mantel-style map if your Ravensoft ) looked a lot better - architecturally. As far as textures go, they seem a little stretched, but that could be fixed.

This new concept seems a little... well... off. The walls don't look like walls so much as cubby-holes (great if your doing this "seven-year-old motif", but utterly useless for aesthetics). Another issue is that wallpaper. ANYBODY that uses a wallpaper like that in that much of a house (even a square inch of a house) should seek help.

Honestly, your last concept was better. Stick to that for now.

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"Iraqniphobia - The fear of non-existant weapons of mass-destruction."

[This message has been edited by Forsakahn (edited May 15, 2004).]

I agree with him. Always finish what you start. The "Egyptian" map did not suck.

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Looks at texture. *dies*

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Weird Shi** Happens.
Light And Darkness

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I suggest you finish the Egyptian one first, actually. That one looks ten times better than this one..

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I never ever have finised what i have started to make... In my idea they suck all


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So...
"007...Whats your name"
"The name is bond...James Bond"
"No, i mean your other codename"
"Dont tell this any further. Its need help"

You know what they say: "You are always your worst critic". Don't be so hard on yourself. Just keep mapping and don't give up. Eventually, you'll like what you are doing and you'll get less criticism over time. Don't think you'll never get criticism because that is just the nature of designing anything. Learn to value other's opinions and always take in full consideration of what others think of your levels (not saying you have to always agree but at least just consider what they say). You just never know what suggestions of ideas that people can gather from what you show them. Just don't get discouraged and just keep mapping to your heart's content.

Sorry if that sounded corny but just thought I share my two cents.

-- SavageX

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"...and if you don't like that, then you need to be slugged in the face repeatedly, until my hands are soaked in blood. Have a nice day!"
http://www.savagex.net

I actually kind of like it. It needs work, yes, but I found that wallpaper hilarious. And scary. It does need to be beveled a bit less, I think.

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[19:59] Happy "Liar liar" dud: This is arguably one of the lowest points in my life.
[20:00] Happy "Liar liar" dud: I'm sitting here infront of my two computers wearing shorts and with no shirt, eating potato salad and orange juice, debating the existance of pants.

Apart from the width of the floor and ceiling in the second shot, I like it, the concept is strange and the place looks surreal.

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Drugs & Stupidity, Tons of it.

Is it actually possible to scale a map by a certain percent? That would totally make me release my stuff, i thought i was doomed.

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