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Progress on my MaDa memorial level
2004-05-21, 1:39 PM #1
[http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/14240.jpg]

[http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/14241.jpg]

[http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/14242.jpg]

[http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/14243.jpg]

[http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/14244.jpg]

Lighting is temporary, jpeg compression sucks. Comments and/or constructive criticism is welcome.

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2004-05-21, 1:43 PM #2
I don't know if the lighting is responsible, but, like in the first pic, sometimes things don't really stand out. Maybe create some "diversity" in your level. [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]

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2004-05-21, 5:56 PM #3
Too much gray, not enough detail. Good start though.
2004-05-21, 6:22 PM #4
The ceiling texture in most of them seems out of place. Especially the one with the red light things. It just doesn't go together well.

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2004-05-21, 6:52 PM #5
The second to last shot is my favourite. Those red light thingies are cool to. But some areas may need different textuers. Also itll look great with lighting so do it now [http://forums.massassi.net/html/biggrin.gif]

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2004-05-22, 5:14 AM #6
Needs more gray. [http://forums.massassi.net/html/tongue.gif]

When you do more work on the lighting, it'll probably help things "stand out" more, like Echoman said.
I also think it needs a little more color (like the last two shots, which I like [http://forums.massassi.net/html/smile.gif]). The level just seems a bit too plain right now.

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2004-05-23, 2:46 PM #7
Needs more acid!

J/k Not too bad, has potential... but in some spots, I'd use some of those darker gray texties that Adam made.

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2004-05-24, 7:18 AM #8
Yah, it's a bit...well bland. Also, screenshots are often taken 3rd person, a tip, gives more view of the world around you. More acid, more color, and better textures. I also can't really see the architecture at all. Post that if you can [http://forums.massassi.net/html/biggrin.gif]

Also, I DID like the hallway with the blue lights. Make the entire level a bit darker, I know lighting is temp, and make it stand out more from wall to wall and I'd say you have a good start [http://forums.massassi.net/html/biggrin.gif]

And I agree with halucid--more acid!
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