A long time ago, I posted a screenplay 'If I Could Dance..' I've since rewrote the entirety of the play, thinking I'd lost it. Well, I found the original, but after compairing, this version is MUCH better. I did it in MSWorks, and with tables, so for you guys to see it, I had to save it as a .html. Well, that caused a few issues. Any time you see the main table change, assume it's one single cell, the last of the above, and the first of the below. Also note: VO means Voice Over, POV means Point of View, and anything in CAPS is music or other sounds.
PLEASE give me some feedback, I really need to know how I can improve the telling of the story. Remember, this is ALL true, so I can't go and change the truth. But what I can do, is tell it from a better angle. Thanks.
If I could Dance... Revisited
Almost forgot: There's some harsh language in this, so beware.
JediKirby
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<]-[ellequin> Nothing is quite as satisfying as placing a .177 lead pellet in between the eyes of a cat.
<]-[ellequin> I think I will leave it's corpse there, to warn all the other cats to keep out of my hibiscus patch
Live on, Adam.
[This message has been edited by jEDIkIRBY (edited June 04, 2004).]
PLEASE give me some feedback, I really need to know how I can improve the telling of the story. Remember, this is ALL true, so I can't go and change the truth. But what I can do, is tell it from a better angle. Thanks.
If I could Dance... Revisited
Almost forgot: There's some harsh language in this, so beware.
JediKirby
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<]-[ellequin> Nothing is quite as satisfying as placing a .177 lead pellet in between the eyes of a cat.
<]-[ellequin> I think I will leave it's corpse there, to warn all the other cats to keep out of my hibiscus patch
Live on, Adam.
[This message has been edited by jEDIkIRBY (edited June 04, 2004).]
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