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Almost a teen angsty poem.
2004-06-15, 4:07 PM #1
Alone in my Basement
By Zac ‘Happydud’ Cohn
6/15/04

I’m sitting here
in my basement
alone.

I’m laying on the couch
watching a movie
alone.

I’m sitting here on the couch
watching a movie in my basement
alone, alone.

A short time ago
I was sitting here
in my basement
with you.

A short time ago
I was laying on the couch
watching a movie
with you.

A short time ago
I was sitting here on the couch
watching a movie in my basement
with you, with you.

A little bit ago
I was sitting there
with you

A little bit ago
you said goodbye
to me

A little bit ago
you left me
alone.

******

Not really looking for anything special, just needed somewhere to post it.

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[16:38] Correction: dick tracy was a real man
[16:38] happydud: Actually... He wasn't. :D
[19:08] Dormouse: hi, my name's happydud and i'm passive-aggress.. SHUTUP!! *stabs nearby orphan*
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2004-06-15, 4:14 PM #2
Well, it's good and... angsty. And ... something. Depressing?
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2004-06-15, 4:26 PM #3
Erm, those stars at the bottom are meant to be a separator, not a censored out word, by the way...

heh... just thought of that.

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[16:38] happydud: Actually... He wasn't. :D
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2004-06-15, 5:24 PM #4
I don't get it.

But then, I don't understand. No one understands.

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2004-06-15, 5:46 PM #5
Its . . . depressing...

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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by happydud:
Erm, those stars at the bottom are meant to be a separator, not a censored out word, by the way...</font>


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...You be the judge... [http://forums.massassi.net/html/wink.gif]

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2004-06-15, 6:02 PM #6
I would go ahead and definetly call it a teen-angst poem, unless you're not a teen, that is. But that doesn't automatically make it a bad poem [http://forums.massassi.net/html/wink.gif]

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