A play I adapted from the story 'Long Walk To forever' from Kurt Vonnegut's book of anthologies 'Welcome to the Monkey House." I wrote this for the summer college program I'm in. I've already casted, and have begun directing the play. I'd like to know what you people think. It's a short 6 pages, especially for all dialogue, and double spaced. For those of you who've read the actual story, I'd like to know what you think of the translation?

JediKirby

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-Proud Leader of the Minnessassian Council
<]-[ellequin> Nothing is quite as satisfying as placing a .177 lead pellet in between the eyes of a cat.
<]-[ellequin> I think I will leave it's corpse there, to warn all the other cats to keep out of my hibiscus patch

Live on, Adam.

Broken Linkage

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"Ever since I was a boy, I have always kept your laws, now I want to follow you and join you in your noble cause. Jesus turned to him and said, 'Sell all you have give to the poor.' Rich young ruler hung his head, not to follow, walked instead." - Vanishing Lesson

I will only say that it will be very interesting to see how one acts out a 404.

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"how harsh... Jedi Kirby loves his 'Special' and unique way of talking." - jEDIkIRBY, circa 2002

"Fourth Zero Fourth: Thoust script shant be seen"

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"Ever since I was a boy, I have always kept your laws, now I want to follow you and join you in your noble cause. Jesus turned to him and said, 'Sell all you have give to the poor.' Rich young ruler hung his head, not to follow, walked instead." - Vanishing Lesson

Using Apache I see....

It no worked...

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"Bantha's are filthy animals.......I don't eat filthy animals."

"Laugh it up Fuzzball!"
-Han Solo

No guys, you got it all wrong.

You need to read the whole error page

Your can clearly see a play forming with these descriptive acts

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Sam: "Sir we can't call it 'The Enterprise'"
Jack: "Why not!"

Oh, here it is:

ACT I: SCENE 1: Apartments

LANDLADY: Pay up or get out, bub.

BUB: I can pay, I swear!

LANDLADY: The money had better be deposited in a blue fluorescent bag at the trainstation tomorrow at 10:00 or I torch your room and everything within. YIYIYIYIYI! JIHAD!

*at this point the landlady slams the door*

BUB: ...oh no, AM or PM? I'd better scroung up some green first.

NARRATOR: Little does our hero know, much of the American currency has become multi-shaded.

SCENE 2: Theatre

jEDIkIRBY: Come one, come all to the Epic TC casting call!

Catsby: Catsby is intrigued. Catsby would like to take over.

eM Playa: I be wit dat shizz, yo. Put me on de list.

Pugler: MWRAA!

BUB: I guess this is my only chance... *scribble*

END ACT I:

INTERMISSION WHERE MUCH IS SOLD AT RIDICULOUSLY HIGH PRICES BUT CANNOT BE EATEN IN THATRE. MBS TO ENFORCE WITH LOBSTER BLUDGEONS.

ACT II: SCENE 1: Final Dress Rehearsal

Catsby: Catsby cannot wait for Broaday. Broadway cannot wait for Catsby. All is well.

eM Playa: Dis tech week has been tough on mah manicure, yo.

Pugler: MWRAA!

BUB: Payday here we come... whew. Finally I'll be able to pay for all that fire damage.

jEDIkIRBY: Places, everyone, quick!

BUB: I'm not too sure about how far I should sway as the tree.

jEDIkIRBY: Go ahead and look at your script before you're on.

SCENE 2: BROADWAY

*play overture*

*Catsby enters in Roman garmets, eM Playa in Egyptian garb with a huge golden necklace, Pugler..., BUB sports his tree costume*

Catsby: FOUR!

eM Playa: OH!

Pugler: MWRAA!

*BUB the tree waves around a little in the background*

CURTAIN

/runs away

Don't be playa hatiiiiiiinnnnn *fades off*

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"Ever since I was a boy, I have always kept your laws, now I want to follow you and join you in your noble cause. Jesus turned to him and said, 'Sell all you have give to the poor.' Rich young ruler hung his head, not to follow, walked instead." - Vanishing Lesson

see, first you get a baseball bat...

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<S51> Give a man a sandwich and you'll feed him for an hour, teach him to make a sandwich and he'll get pissed, hit you and tell you to make him another sandwich.

Damn Cpanel didn't add the .html for me. Works now.

You know, isn't it funny, that no one will post, now that it works? 404's and red x's get more posts than real images, and real stories.

JediKirby

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-Proud Leader of the Minnessassian Council
<]-[ellequin> Nothing is quite as satisfying as placing a .177 lead pellet in between the eyes of a cat.
<]-[ellequin> I think I will leave it's corpse there, to warn all the other cats to keep out of my hibiscus patch

Live on, Adam.

It's okay. I don't know. Maybe.

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"Look at me! I'm Tracer! BLAHBLAHBLAH!"

-MBeggar

It's good. It's bad. I don't know. I didn't read it. But I did have an awfully good time writing what I thought it might have been. :]

Like I figured, no one actually responds, now.

JediKirby

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-Proud Leader of the Minnessassian Council
<]-[ellequin> Nothing is quite as satisfying as placing a .177 lead pellet in between the eyes of a cat.
<]-[ellequin> I think I will leave it's corpse there, to warn all the other cats to keep out of my hibiscus patch

Live on, Adam.

FOR GOODNESS SAKE, I READ THE THING AND I RESPONDED! WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT?!

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"Look at me! I'm Tracer! BLAHBLAHBLAH!"

-MBeggar