Well I've been working on this for some time now for the Lab MP level thing and would like to show you guys how I'm doing so far. I hope to make a few rooms from that hallway and make that teleport thing go to a Xen-type island for a more death match type of play.


So... what do you think?

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~vegiemaster~

Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Level! Level!

/Edward

I love the originality with the Archi, all it needs is lighting. Good lighting.

JediKirby

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Live on, Adam.

I love those SS

It many not have the eye candy of Jo/JA,

But its gritty feel is better then most(/all?) Jo/JA lvls I'v seen..

but maybe I'm just tired of seeing those super waxed mirrored floors..

[This message has been edited by Grim Zombie (edited June 25, 2004).]

Huh? Sorry for being ignorant but what are ss? Also i probably should have clarified this (this is only my second topic ever) but i figured wouldn't need too, this is JK for the Labratory Mod (he wanted some editors to make some MP lvls) not sure if you understood that. but thanks everyone for teh encouragement I hope to finnish this as my first released map, and hope that it's fun.

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~vegiemaster~

SS = Screenshots

I like the interesting archi. And good texture placement and usage.

I hope there room to fight.

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The Massassi JO/JA Single Player contest info

thanks for the info and thanks for the comments. Btw I'm Going to make a few rooms branching from that hallway and also that teleporter in the middle will teleport you to another planet for deathmatch style play.

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~vegiemaster~

I like it. Looks Half-Lifeish. Or maybe Perfect Darkish.

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THat's JK!

It looks incredible!!! Why is everyone treating this like it's pretty good and nothing more - that's groundbreaking! Maybe I've been staring at the monitor too long or something but that looks unbelievavbly good!!!

That orb thing is an incredible effect, and that corridor in the last shot almost looks photo-realistic!

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~ Vader's Corner ~

Whoa !!!

I think I may have been a little late spotting this thread - I really like what's going on with this project - it looks impressive so far and I totally agree with Thrawn[numbers] . Something's niggling at me though and I suppose it's the fact that there's something in those screenshots that reminds me of something out of "Deus Ex"... I just can't put my finger on it (and that's meant as a huge compliment! )

I really like the second screenshot as well as the third one; the latter on an architectural p-o-v

So... (round-about crits) keep up the sweet-a$$ looking work

-Jackpot

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Wow, the last two of you must've never seen anything remotely good for JK. Don't get me wrong, it looks ok - but hardly anything I'd call impressive.

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Yes, thankyou, I've seen stuff remotely good, but you don't have to make out like this level's average. I think it's really fantastic. The only way I can currently think of that vegiemaster got that fantastic orb effect was through use of a sprite. I admit, maybe I was staring at my monitor too long, how ever I still follow up that this is an extremely promising piece of work.

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~ Vader's Corner ~

It's alright. The pipes on the side are a nice touch, but the rest is just kindof... simple. And far too light. The textures are kind of blugh, but I think if you just make the place a little darker, they'll look fine... plus it'll fit the Lab theme alot better!

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