Look at the screens and say what you think.

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/mainhall.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm1.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm2.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm3.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm4.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm5.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm6.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm7.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm9.jpg

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm10.jpg

this is what I am doing at the moment, I am not done with it yet.

http://files.photojerk.com/Rashzagal/pgm8.jpg

If anyone has a requist of something I need to put in it, I would like to know!
Also if there is anything else I need to improve


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[This message has been edited by Rashzagal (edited August 17, 2004).]

Looks good. Your first try? Are you new at massassi?

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ever tried the SpriteMod (JO 2003)?

[This message has been edited by G-Man (edited August 17, 2004).]

[This message has been edited by G-Man (edited August 17, 2004).]

It looks rather empty and the architecture seems bland. Put in some interesting structural designs (beams? columns?), and the map will look really good.

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Snail racing: (500 posts per line)

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The Massassi JO/JA Single Player contest info (I don't know why I have this still in my sig)

I had made maps before,
I didn't publish most of it, but I think I am going to finish this one. Yes I just registered to massassi. Normally I just posted on mapcenter pcgamemods and oxyonagon.com



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Now this looks good. Reminds me of Myst.

Don't know myst. I might want to make a duel map which has this style of building everywhere, later.

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Now I've only ever seen snippets of Myst, but as I went through all the screenies (and before I saw Zell posted his comment), there was just "something" about the screenshot that Zell chose that made me stop and think. Still can't put my finger on it, but there's something about the "essence" of that screenshot...

Otherwise, ditto Echoman's comments . Keep up the good work

-Jackpot

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"lucky_jackpot is the smily god..." - gothicX
"jackpot is an evil evil man... so evil, in fact, that he's awesome." - Seb

"Life is mostly froth and bubble, but two things stand in stone,
Kindness in another's trouble, courage in your own"
("Ye Wearie Wayfarer" - by Adam Lindsay Gordon)

I really like the second picture!

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"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." - Edmund Burke

"Never let your sense of morals prevent you from doing what is right." -Isaac Asimov

^_^ how about that? I am trying to do it in the other parts of the map aswell

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Looks excellent!

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Have a good one,
Freelancer

Like there's a decent bit of patchwork stuck in a boxy environment? Rash, follow LK's advise.

Nice improvement 8)



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Call me Vedder.
Author of A Pirate's Tale (Mots SP)& Co-Author of The Darkest Thing (JK SP)
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<phantom> You're always going to be aloser if you attempt to aspire to massassi standards.
<phantom> They're a bunch of socially inadequate <beep> whores who have little or no lives.

Hehe, am working on it


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