any feedback?

[Edit: I include no Lightning yet.]

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SpriteMod (JO 2003)

[This message has been edited by G-Man (edited August 18, 2004).]

It looks like a good start, some interesting architecture going on. Keep working at it!

Add some trimming and detail where the walls meet the floor and ceiling. Vary the textures so you can differentiate between wall floor and ceiling. Keep in mind that people walk on the floor, so it'll be dirtier, also think about the enviroment and climate, is it cold wet and damp? Show that the place is 'weathered', rather than brand new. Last but not least, LIGHTING. Learn to do it! Work your texture alignment aswell, try to get things lined up and natural looking.

You can do it!

-ProAni

[This message has been edited by ProAnimator (edited August 18, 2004).]

Some interesting texture and (and some interesting architect too?) would be nice. Maybe a theme or something? And the level seem small (not much height).

There is nothing really to look at yet. I just a hallway, grating and a window. Is this a significant portion of the level? I assume this will be worked, so keep it up. Maybe add rooms that catches the player's eye.

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The Massassi JO/JA Single Player contest info (I don't know why I have this still in my sig)

I allready know how to make LIGHTNING, but I don't include it like in here

http://forums.massassi.net/html/Forum5/HTML/011507.html

http://forums.massassi.net/html/Forum5/HTML/011406.html



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SpriteMod (JO 2003)

Er, looks good, but what's the theme?

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Space Colony Inc. Phoenix Suburban City Dereliction Camp Marshall

It looks really simple, but for some reason, their's just something about it that makes it look really interesting. I like how the ceiling is at more of a person-height for once.

and btw, is this JK or mots?

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The low ceiling makes me feel claustrophobia. I don't know if that's what you're going for, but it could work to your advantage.

The first shot, if coupled up with some good code for a cutscene or a puzzle, has the potential to be amazing.

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Life of Grismath
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Rites of Xanthus

I think a lot of the claustrophobia is coming from how oversized the textures are. I do like the design of the hallway, however simple.

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Banks and banks of humming machinery! I've never seen so many knobs. We're going to have to do something, Charlie! Try pushing that button there. No? How about that one? No, not that one either. I know! I'll try pushing this one. Hold my hat will you? Good fellow.

any ideas? Lord "of Puzzles" Grismath?

And any news what happen to Grismath(LOG) next...


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SpriteMod (JO 2003)

hmm... I actually can't think of anything that would make sense with it at the moment. What I do suggest you do, though, is align those textures.

As for LoG, I'll actually work on it right now. Thank you.

make it to where the player runs into a forcefield, then he has to run around the level looking for power conduates to slash!!!

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