Thoughts? Anything I should work on / change?

I really can't think of anything so any ideas would be appreciated.

(No, I didn't draw this. But I did do the outline / colour / shading.)
(I might post the original sketch my friend did later)

[EDIT: Yes, I know shes lacking legs. You can blame that on the original sketch. ]
[EDIT2: A thought. Perhaps I should draw up some baggy cargo jeans in illustraitor and add them to the image? I think that'd work.]

[EDIT3: Added legs and pants! Wo!]
[EDIT4: Pupils fixed.]

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"Judging by the name of the author, and the name of the work, I'd guess it's an energy "beam". You know, like in the Japanese cartoons where those guys with big hair fly around, talk philosophy, and shoot fireballs at each other." - Hellequin

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That seriously makes me want to run and hide.

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"I'd rather be hated for who I am rather than loved for who I pretend to be." -Janis Joplin

Try to make her eyes look a bit less dilated.. and well, huge. At the moment she looks as if she's just had the biggest caffeine intake ever.
Other than that it's pretty good though.

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"Do... or do not... there is no try"-Yoda

What he said.

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Banks and banks of humming machinery! I've never seen so many knobs. We're going to have to do something, Charlie! Try pushing that button there. No? How about that one? No, not that one either. I know! I'll try pushing this one. Hold my hat will you? Good fellow.

The head is nice, but the body is too small. Neck is almost as large as the waist.

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It looks like a demon.

A very NICE looking demon, but a demon nonetheless.

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They're supposed to be catlike or somesuch. That and its animeish so the large eyes are excusable.



*shrug* I can't really do anything about that. Thats the fault of the original drawing.


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"Judging by the name of the author, and the name of the work, I'd guess it's an energy "beam". You know, like in the Japanese cartoons where those guys with big hair fly around, talk philosophy, and shoot fireballs at each other." - Hellequin

*bump* Updates.

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"Judging by the name of the author, and the name of the work, I'd guess it's an energy "beam". You know, like in the Japanese cartoons where those guys with big hair fly around, talk philosophy, and shoot fireballs at each other." - Hellequin

I'm quite the anime fan myself thanks. XD But even by those standards they looked dilated. It's somewhat better now though with the black pupils. So keep it up ^.^

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"Do... or do not... there is no try"-Yoda

One thing about the drawing...

Yea i know theres flaws but that was a quick 2 minute sketch...

The final will be better. <and have a different pose>

I like the coloring... the pants are cool but I had something different in mind but its good ^^

It looks nice, but god, that thing is scary.

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WAITER: Here’s your green salad, sir.
ANAKIN: What? You fool, I told you NO CROUTONS! Aaaaaaargh!

It's a man wearing a woman's wig, by anime drawing standards. Try making the shoulders less broad, the hips more define, and the neck less waste-like. Oh, and she has no left breast, right now. At least make a slightly off purple area underneith where the breast would be, because right now she's got a lopsided chest.

JediKirby

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Live on, Adam.

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Heres the original sketch... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v308/Sinriu/shrieka2.jpg

*slaughters the anime-loving infidels*

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And that was constructive....how?

Seriously, if you don't have a usefull comment to make, don't make it.

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