First off, the site: http://whr.sorrowind.net

The content: Right now, very little. Just the main site, including news, and the manga. Everything else is dead links (I disabled them, so hopefully no 404s!), for the moment. But I want suggestions on any of the following:

1. Site design. I am avoiding images if possible, going for a mostly imageless site. The only images I have now are the simple smilies for news, the background (3 pixel gif), and of course, the manga. Anything else to pick apart is open game.

2. Manga art. Any and all art is up for criticsm, character assassination, suicide-murder, whatever you feel.

3. Manga story. Obviously it is the sequel to Witch Hunter Robin, a semi-popular, and very new anime. The storyline is brand new, based off the last episode's events. There will be some new characters, and a lot of old ones. (Everyone from STN-J, and a couple others, like Harry.)

4. Other random suggestions, anything I missed, or should be shot for, is free game. I just want opinions, and suggestions

Oh, and when you read the manga, you might want to go to the first page before reading the second, just so you get a jist of what is going on. Unless you just want to tear apart my art, then it doesn't matter.

Thanks in advance!

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"The future is not determined by a throw of the dice, but is determined by the conscious decisions of you and me."
I am addicted to ellipses!!! AHHH!!! ...
Make Sorrowind Worthwhile... join it! http://sorrowind.net

[This message has been edited by Cool Matty (edited August 26, 2004).]

Go CM! Dunno what much to offer, though I know with NeSi we kept the width to 700 pixels I think? So that's there's no evil side-scrolling action. I think yours has some evil side-scrolling action with the side bar. /shrug

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Check out the following stories over at the Interactive Story Board:
The Never-ending Story Thread or visit the new webcomic version!
The Vision Cycle series
Featured Story: Scions of Light

Actually, mine has a standard width of 650. The actual dimensions are the same as Megatokyo. I'll look into small resolutions though, thanks for pointing that out.

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"The future is not determined by a throw of the dice, but is determined by the conscious decisions of you and me."
I am addicted to ellipses!!! AHHH!!! ...
Make Sorrowind Worthwhile... join it! http://sorrowind.net

*bumpity*

Meh, shoulda waited till I got more content I guess, no responses

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"The future is not determined by a throw of the dice, but is determined by the conscious decisions of you and me."
I am addicted to ellipses!!! AHHH!!! ...
Make Sorrowind Worthwhile... join it! http://sorrowind.net

Drawing style needs to be refined.

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<]-[ellequin[]Off> Everytime I think I've hit the bottom, and can't get any lower, someone tosses me a shovel

I jealous, I wish I could make something that sexy...

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*Takes out his blaster and fires shots at the wall, the blastmarks leave the words "S-TROOPER WUZ 'ERE!!!"