ok, a couple of spelling nazi points about the intro -
operated (first frame I think)
you spelt it where ever, but it should be one word, wherever <-- also, and this is just me being a bit weird, but saying 'however, wherever' sounds quite odd. maybe make it 'unfortunately, wherever' or something like that?
and a couple in the last frame...time line alterations that would ensue. And so began T-Bot's quest.
t'was pretty fun, a bit slow for my liking, and quite repetitive. I only had to use the time freeze once, which made it seem a little redundant.
<spe> maevie - proving dykes can't fly
<Dor> You're levelling up and gaining more polys!