Just a old level project....

2nd

3rd

4th

Lacks lighting, but otherwise looks good. You've definately improved a lot.

ok, holy crap. You need to use the editors corner.

I'm confused. Is this some kind of house?

Nice 3do placement I guess.

Nice textures and couch model.

Ok, I include lightning not yet....

And if someone have a good idea to include in this level, just say it....

Textures from Delphian's office level.....

Yes it is.....

That's nice, but it needs a few things.

First of all, the textures for the holes in the ceiling... it shouldn't be brick, that doesn't make sense imo. Use the cement texture, or a different shade thereof.

Next, it's too clean. The holes in the walls (as well as the aforementioned holes), would have had material at one point to fill them. Where's the debris? Unless this is supposed to be a currently occupied home with an exceptionally tidy occupant, I think it needs some debris 3dos. Bicks, chunks of concrete, etc.

However, the general archi looks good. Keep it up!

I meant that one post per picture is horrible. Especially when it's not technically meant for that.

JediKirby

Hmm...nice couch. Some textures could be more aligned, though, like the brick walls.
The archi is interesting. Overall, nice job.

Defenitely some improvements, some advice:

14827.jpg : Make little steel grate 3do's and make them stick out of the hole's sides, so it'll look as if it was reinforced concrete. There's a stitching error on the left wall.

14828.jpg : misaligned floor, rotated wall texture. I'm going to assume you're going to change the ceiling to the texture used in the picture before, because a ceiling like this would certainly collapse.

14830.jpg : left wall misalligns with back wall. texturing on the sides of the hole in the wall doesn't make sense. No logical light source.

Overal it looks a bit bland a boring. Adding debris was already suggested and I concur with that Idea. But also think about things like, lights, plumbing/wiring, other furniture.

Nice improvement.:) That brick ceiling just doesn't quite look right, though.

Oh, and I really like that couch.

the couch is not made by me.....


But here some updates......

comments?

Just curious, what exactly is it meant to be?

because of the ceiling, does it looks now better....

Stitch the brick textures so they are the same size and line up.

Sorry if I didn't explain myself, I meant what is your entire level supposed to be about. It obviously isn't an Imperial Facility, but at the same time it doesn't quite pass for your average suburban home. What were you going for when you made this?

The story is secret at the moment....









Is the Light ok?