Here is a link to Pizza Guys:
http://www.websitetothemax.com/pizza.html
In order to get what I'm showcasing you need to watch that first (I didn't make it, I just did a voice for it... Newgrounds gave it Daily 3rd place, it has almost 10k views, Flashplayer has 280,000 views on it). It was so popular Zonzo (The guy who made it) is making Pizza Guys 2 (In the works), so I got bored tonight and made a script, which he liked, so he is going to use it for Pizza Guys 3! Yay! Comments/Critisism/Suggestions? (On the script below, not the animation)
(Opening Credits)
(Fade in to Bill and Fred sitting in the back of Decepticon Pizza…bored)
Fred: We haven’t had a single order all day, why are we even here?!
Bill: Hey, don’t blame me, I’m not the one scaring away all the customers.
(Cut to Megatron on the phone with a customer)
Megatron:…and that’s why Optimus Prime will pay for what he has done!
Customer: Dude, I just want a freaking large cheese pizza!
Megatron: Yes, cheese, the most evil topping there is, a pizza cannot be m-*customer hangs up* [dial tone] …Hello?
(Cut back to Bill and Fred)
Fred: Well there’s no way I’m just going to sit here all day long waiting to deliver pizza. We need to make some money, and fast.
Bill: Why don’t we just start a Lemonade stand or something?
Fred:… Lemonade.?
Bill: Oh yeah, all the kids are doing it!
Fred: Yeah, but they are like 5 years old.
Bill: Oh come on
Fred: No, no way are you going to convince me into this.
(Cut to Bill and Fred standing at a poorly constructed Lemonade stand)
Fred: I can’t believe you convinced me into doing this…This is the dumbest idea ever.
Bill: Oh come on give it a chance.
Fred: Fine, but it isn’t going to work…
(Fade out to “2 Hours Later”)
(Fade back in to the Lemonade stand)
(There is a huge line coming from the back of the lemonade stand, it’s obviously become a huge success)
Fred: How do you do it…
Bill: My charm and good looks?
Fred: …
Bill: What?..Anyway you need to come with me, we need more supplies!
Fred: Why can’t you go?
Bill: You think I can carry all of those lemons on my own?!
Fred: Whose going to look after the stand?
Bill: Oh, don’t you worry, I have that covered…
(Cut to Megatron running the lemonade stand)
Little Girl: This lemonade is to sour, where’s the sugar?
Megatron: Sugar? Sugar is bad. Suger is what optimu-
Little Girl: No it isn’t Sugar is good.
Megatron: …
Little Girl: …
Megatron: Traitor!
(Megatron flips over the lemonade stand in anger, everyone runs away in fear)
(The camera zooms in on Megatron who looks back and forth worried like >.> <.<, he runs off and the screen fades to the next scene where Bill and Fred are in their apartment thinking up a plan.)
Bill: Okay, okay, I have another idea.
Fred: No!
Bill: You didn’t even hear my idea yet…
Fred: I know…
Bill: Follow me.
Fred: I just said no!
Bill:…please?
Fred: No!
Bill: Fine, I’ll go on my own.
(Bill leaves the apartment, the screen fades to black, then fades back to the apartment where Bill enters rather excited)
Bill: Aha! You’re gonna love me for this!
(Bill holds out a large amount of cash)
Fred: Woah?! Where did that come from?
Bill: Well…(Screen fades to Bill standing next to a blind man playing a saxaphone, the blind man has his sax case open and people walking buy are tossing change in it)
(Bill goes to grab money out of the blind mans saxaphone case)
Blind man: Hey! Give that back!
Bill: Woah?! Wait, aren’t you blind?
Blind man: …..err..
Bill:…
Blind man: … gotta go!
(The blind man runs away)
(Bill takes the saxaphone case fill of money and runs off, the screen fades back to the apartment)
Fred: You stole from a blind guy?!
Bill: The guy wasn’t even really blind!
Fred: But you were going to rob him even if he was!
Bill:… Touché.
(Cue to the next day, Bill and Fred are in their car on their way to work)
Bill: Man am I glad everything is back to normal now.
Fred: Yeah, me to-Holy crap.
Bill: What? What’s wr-Oh my god..
(Zoom out to see Decepticon Pizza is now ‘Decepticon Lemonade’)
(Suddenly Bill wakes up)
Bill: Oh thank god it was all a dream.
Megatron: More lemonade?
Bill: Ahh!!!
(Go to black, roll credits and music)
http://www.websitetothemax.com/pizza.html
In order to get what I'm showcasing you need to watch that first (I didn't make it, I just did a voice for it... Newgrounds gave it Daily 3rd place, it has almost 10k views, Flashplayer has 280,000 views on it). It was so popular Zonzo (The guy who made it) is making Pizza Guys 2 (In the works), so I got bored tonight and made a script, which he liked, so he is going to use it for Pizza Guys 3! Yay! Comments/Critisism/Suggestions? (On the script below, not the animation)
(Opening Credits)
(Fade in to Bill and Fred sitting in the back of Decepticon Pizza…bored)
Fred: We haven’t had a single order all day, why are we even here?!
Bill: Hey, don’t blame me, I’m not the one scaring away all the customers.
(Cut to Megatron on the phone with a customer)
Megatron:…and that’s why Optimus Prime will pay for what he has done!
Customer: Dude, I just want a freaking large cheese pizza!
Megatron: Yes, cheese, the most evil topping there is, a pizza cannot be m-*customer hangs up* [dial tone] …Hello?
(Cut back to Bill and Fred)
Fred: Well there’s no way I’m just going to sit here all day long waiting to deliver pizza. We need to make some money, and fast.
Bill: Why don’t we just start a Lemonade stand or something?
Fred:… Lemonade.?
Bill: Oh yeah, all the kids are doing it!
Fred: Yeah, but they are like 5 years old.
Bill: Oh come on
Fred: No, no way are you going to convince me into this.
(Cut to Bill and Fred standing at a poorly constructed Lemonade stand)
Fred: I can’t believe you convinced me into doing this…This is the dumbest idea ever.
Bill: Oh come on give it a chance.
Fred: Fine, but it isn’t going to work…
(Fade out to “2 Hours Later”)
(Fade back in to the Lemonade stand)
(There is a huge line coming from the back of the lemonade stand, it’s obviously become a huge success)
Fred: How do you do it…
Bill: My charm and good looks?
Fred: …
Bill: What?..Anyway you need to come with me, we need more supplies!
Fred: Why can’t you go?
Bill: You think I can carry all of those lemons on my own?!
Fred: Whose going to look after the stand?
Bill: Oh, don’t you worry, I have that covered…
(Cut to Megatron running the lemonade stand)
Little Girl: This lemonade is to sour, where’s the sugar?
Megatron: Sugar? Sugar is bad. Suger is what optimu-
Little Girl: No it isn’t Sugar is good.
Megatron: …
Little Girl: …
Megatron: Traitor!
(Megatron flips over the lemonade stand in anger, everyone runs away in fear)
(The camera zooms in on Megatron who looks back and forth worried like >.> <.<, he runs off and the screen fades to the next scene where Bill and Fred are in their apartment thinking up a plan.)
Bill: Okay, okay, I have another idea.
Fred: No!
Bill: You didn’t even hear my idea yet…
Fred: I know…
Bill: Follow me.
Fred: I just said no!
Bill:…please?
Fred: No!
Bill: Fine, I’ll go on my own.
(Bill leaves the apartment, the screen fades to black, then fades back to the apartment where Bill enters rather excited)
Bill: Aha! You’re gonna love me for this!
(Bill holds out a large amount of cash)
Fred: Woah?! Where did that come from?
Bill: Well…(Screen fades to Bill standing next to a blind man playing a saxaphone, the blind man has his sax case open and people walking buy are tossing change in it)
(Bill goes to grab money out of the blind mans saxaphone case)
Blind man: Hey! Give that back!
Bill: Woah?! Wait, aren’t you blind?
Blind man: …..err..
Bill:…
Blind man: … gotta go!
(The blind man runs away)
(Bill takes the saxaphone case fill of money and runs off, the screen fades back to the apartment)
Fred: You stole from a blind guy?!
Bill: The guy wasn’t even really blind!
Fred: But you were going to rob him even if he was!
Bill:… Touché.
(Cue to the next day, Bill and Fred are in their car on their way to work)
Bill: Man am I glad everything is back to normal now.
Fred: Yeah, me to-Holy crap.
Bill: What? What’s wr-Oh my god..
(Zoom out to see Decepticon Pizza is now ‘Decepticon Lemonade’)
(Suddenly Bill wakes up)
Bill: Oh thank god it was all a dream.
Megatron: More lemonade?
Bill: Ahh!!!
(Go to black, roll credits and music)
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