Ralph Nader the republican hater
Tryin' to make the world greater
Takin' votes from the tree hater, bad debater
He uses a speak-n-spell as a speech creator
Choked on a pretzel 'cause he’s an amateur masticator

He passed the SAT's when he was 34
Now he's president, and he's takin' the country to war
The justification is about as lame as Derek Jeter
It's Gulf War: Redux, same war, different leader

Now John Kerry comes in and he knows a lot more
About health care, education, and more importantly the war
But Dick Cheney is worried, and he's cryin' on the floor
After viewing Fahrenheit 9/11 from director Michael Moore

So if your mad with our president and you find his lies a bore
Make the right choice and vote Kerry/Edwards 2004

(P.S. The top part was made a while back, I just finished this yesterday, so that's why the top part might look familiar. Wasn't sure if I should put it here, or in music forum.)

nice.

Nader is the dude, at least on albino black sheep

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  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}

No offense, but the content was better than the poem

Fixed.

Either way, I take them as half-compliments :p

all bush haters dl ELG from my website!

bobafett it was a joke because i'm voting for bush but thanks still ok?

Not bad. Heck, I'd send it to John Kerry's site for the heck of it.

What happened to Sine's typing skills? :\

It's creepy kinda, like zombies would be. Internet zombies.

Pretty good effort there, SAJN. You continue to show qutie good promise with you politcal-art-type-stuff; I see you as a millionair campaigning guru later on, or mabye I've just had too much caffine, gulping down these chocolate-cinnamon-hazelnut coffees in this incredibly re-used Kerry 7-11 cup... (my local 7-11 permanently run out of Kerry cups about a week ago)

Mind if I show it to some friends of mine? (Including my county's Democratic Party)

Go for it.

SAJN's sig just got bigger.

Also, it has no rhythm. :\

I've recited this atleast atleast 4 or 5 times infront of people, it has a perfect rhythm. The first 5 lines have a different rhythm then the next 10 lines. I always check for flow and rhythm when I write, but I can understand why you don't see the flow due to the sudden change between line 5 and 6. (The reason for this was the first 5 lines were written months before the next 10 lines, and I decided I wanted a new beat.)

The other half is the presentation, how fast it's said, where parts slow down etc. The other half was, this was originally a rap, then a poem, then it turned into a rap again.

(Notice instead of 4-4-4-2, it's 5-4-4-2)

So in other words, when presented by myself it sounds perfect, but being read by some it doesn't really have a proper poetic form.

Token of my appreciation.

Umm... Yeah. Vote Nader! Really! I'm right behind you. Please?

Eh I agree with thrawn[numbers], it doesn't really flow .. I like the content, though, you did well with wordplay.

Just the structure of it isnt' right for a rap. Rap rhymes are do ne slightly differently. But it's good.

When you recorded the first 5 lines for me there was no rhythm at all. :p