Digital remake of an old college project I did, took about 5 hours, what do you think?

(*note :: clothing was added to censor this to be massassi postable.)

Hey, that's very cool. I like especially those hands reaching out of the flames. The picture has a lot of attitude and atmosphere in it. And some deeper meaning than just pretty details.

However, I think the beam of light could have been more organic (as you have already some effort to that direction), more living if you know what I mean. And more integrated into the woman. I think now it seems too technical and seems to be somewhat in the background, behind the woman.

Btw... Where's the original with nothing extra added? It might be even better!

Her hand seems a bit weird. And I agree with lassev that the beam seeming to technical and maybe even out of place. I think that could need some work.

I defenitely love the bottom half of the picture, though

Looks good; however, blend the edges of the beam's core into the background. The dead stop the edges have just kind of stand out.

Nice of course it would look more complete without the censors but what can you do, very dark... very nice.

Very nice, great ideas and color. I love the twirly cell-looking things around the beam of light.

Suggestions:
• The beam should, like others have said, look more smooth/organic, and I also think it should be centered.
• Her visible hand needs work. Needs to be more defined and slender.
• I think this should be more of a side-on profile shot, as opposed to having her body being angled slightly into the background.

updated and in its final uncensored form (thanks for your guyses input, this one needed it) :

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14008506/

If its really that big of a deal remove the link and accept my apology.

I still think some sort of aura would've looked better.

Oh, yes. It looks a lot better now. The beam fits the image now much, much better, and it has just the kind of organic feeling I was first time picturing in my mind when I saw the first version. It's very interesting. It's always extremely interesting to see these kind of images of mysterious quality by people who really can draw. Images with vision.

Gothix has a point there, though I might not agree with him. I think any kind of aura would have clashed with the hands, which are wounding the maiden after all. And those fiery hands are still the part I like most. Most exquisite, really.

Great improvements!

I like the final job even better, very nice work man.

Yeah, great work. One thing though: The unlucky angle makes her two legs seem to be only one fat leg...and the left hand's fingertips are just where the hair ends, which gives the hair kind of an edgy cut.
Everything else is near-perfect.

Magnificent!

The clothing just ruins it. uncensored version is definately better

i like her boobies

if(getThingFlags(source) & 0x8){
  do her}
elseif(getThingFlags(source) & 0x4){
  do other babe}
else{
  do a dude}

I always admired yours

The new uncensored version is my new background!