Which would be today, European History... we watched a film about WWI so I kinda.

anyways:



WIP, haven't even finished drawing.

Next = inking, scanning, photoshop ready-ing-age, coloring, etc.

Suggestions? Criticisms? Unfounded flaming of my ancestry?

NOTE: It scanned rather poorly, sorry

You should try drawing The BSG for Zentatsu.com... since MARK is taking his time.

If you're interested, contakt me.

JediKirby

Your grandfather was an *******.

Nice drawing, BTW.

I love your style.

Pretty nice.

However, the angle the shield is at right now seems impossible considering the angle his arm and hand are at.
Also, the legs seem to be turned a bit to much in relation to the torso. I think the second arm might fix that though.

Lots of detail, porportions look pretty good.

Mouth is scary, goggles seem to have no depth, and the sheild is inverted. Otherwise, looks okay.

Edit: Nevermind about the shield inversion, I know what's wrong. It's the way its drawn, you can see it either way. (Sort of like how you look at a cube and can see 2 different cubes by looking at them differently.)

To fix, you should probably rotate the shield just slightly, so to give the eye some hints as to where it is bending out to.

CM--that's where shading comes into play :p

I love it. Just make sure to make a terrorist one too :p

Contrapposto!~



Mouth: not a mouth... (look closer) like i said, i still have to re-define certain areas, that being one of them.

Goggles: all I did was outline those so far

Shield: Yes, I do need to rework this, because lots of people who viewed it have said it's backwards >_<

Proportions however, are merely a matter of personal taste when it comes to cartooning... If I made him tall and willowy, with legs long in relation to his torso, you may have said the proportions weren't quite right, but it all depends on what the artist is going for... ( I realize you didn't criticize them, I'm just thinking out loud)


bumpity.

The shield is fine--just needs shading to determine which way it's bent.

ooh


it's a BANDANA.


oooohhh