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2005-03-13, 8:45 AM #1
[http://veddertheshredder.com/drawing/marie.jpg]

You have no idea how long it took me to get a good 'bite bottom lip'-effect. And now it's all lost in resizing and jpg compression. Luckily I have the privilige to view the origional drawing. ;)
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2005-03-13, 8:56 AM #2
I really like the hair.. the cheeks seem a bit too wide, though.
2005-03-13, 10:48 AM #3
Nose is too long, too wide, and eyes are too far apart. Looks pretty good, though.
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2005-03-13, 10:51 AM #4
Yes after scanning and resizing her chin seems smaller which makes here cheeks seem wider. :o I intended the shape of the face as it is, but after resizing it seems emphasized.

I'm not very satisfied about the eyes, they are either too wide open or her pupils not big enough. Don't know, but her gaze seems wrong now.
Her left hand is a bit of a failure, but I'm more than satisfied about her right hand. The hair too I'm very content about. Curly hair is a lot thougher to draw than steep hair. (is that what they call it in English?)
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2005-03-13, 12:58 PM #5
zooikes, your artwork is wasted on massassi, get a deviant account man...

Cheeks, nose and eye width are the result of a NON-stylized drawing, jesus not everybody is a roman god, look in the mirror lately? (gothicx excluded... :()
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2005-03-13, 1:16 PM #6
Her face reminds me of something out of a Jim Henson movie, but other than that, it all looks great.
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2005-03-13, 1:28 PM #7
I actually have a deviant account, except I only uploaded one picture and after that never used it again. :o
Maybe I should get around uploading everything there.

However I do have an Elfwood account I keep updated and there are some other fora I showcase these on.

Glad you all like it.
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2005-03-13, 7:12 PM #8
She looks like a mutant hobbit.

Some people say that's a bad thing.

I say, "Bring on the hobbit lovin'!"

...I also say "tadpole" a lot.
2005-03-13, 7:35 PM #9
Quote:
Originally posted by Vincent Valentine
She looks like a mutant hobbit.

Some people say that's a bad thing.

I say, "Bring on the hobbit lovin'!"

...I also say "tadpole" a lot.

You're a funny soul.
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2005-03-14, 9:16 AM #10
I think the problem with her eyes is in her left eye (the one on the right, to us).
The (our) left part of the eye is covered up by too much flesh which is blocking it and making the eyes seem different sizes. The pupils seem dead on though, so I think that's it.

Also, what's up with the wrinkling at her armpits. Too much starch? They're very straight and uniform.



[Postscript: I always feel kind of bad when I post these because I'm being quite critical (in my mind, at least) and yet I know that there's no way I can draw that well. I mean crap, man!]

[edit] THE HAIR! I just noticed the hair. a-maz-ing.
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2005-03-14, 4:06 PM #11
Very nice drawing but that's a really, really ugly woman.
2005-03-16, 3:08 AM #12
For those interested:

My elfwood gallery: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/e/e/eekelen/eekelen.html
Here you'll find practically all drawings I've showcased here in the last years, except the one or two perhaps that weren't sci-fi related. (and this current one)

I'm currently in the process of putting stuff on my deviant art gallery:
http://st-vedder.deviantart.com/

I'm not going to put everything up there, just the most recent ones and those older ones I think look kind of cool.

If you like my drawings be sure to drop a comment.
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