Hi all,

Im currently working on a new map, this one for my clan and wanted some objective opinions on it.

These pics were taken in the radient program, as as you'll see, the map is not finished (ie- alot more detail work, buttons/spawns, flags, and lighting mainly). Im wanting to get comments on the overall design i guess before i start on the lighting. Anyway.. heres some links to the pics. Thanks again for your time.

~LK~

http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan1.bmp


http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan2.bmp


http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan3.bmp


http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan4.bmp


http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan5.bmp


http://home.comcast.net/~andrewjbrady/clan6.bmp

pretty cool, seems like you could make it look a bit more realistic in screenshot 6 if you took away all those flat surfaces and made them a bit more rocky. What game is this for?

Try for less cloning and repetition, it makes the level look boring.

Lighting will make or break this level.

Hehe, nice to see you've found Massassi!

Please try to post a compiled and lit level next time. It's REALLY hard to have an opinion when all you can see is cloned and recloned areas. As said above, lighting will make or break it, so we can't really provide constructive criticism until then. Any opinions we have now will change once it's lit.

JediKirby