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The Tiger
2005-04-18, 10:40 AM #1
This was inspired by the famous poem written by William Blake.

It goes thus:
Quote:
Wrapped in golden, grassy stalks
Prowls the tiger crimson bold.
Runs it fast and slow it walks
Through steamy plains and rivers cold.

Faster, Faster! Catch the prey!
Feast from dawn 'til end of day!
Flying, flying! 'Cross the ground!
Coming closer ev'ry bound!

Through the jungle darts a blur
Nothing halts its fury now!
Sunlight holds its golden fur
And day receives its savage growl!

Nearer, nearer! Comes the hunt!
Lags behind with weary grunt!
Soon to catch and to devour!
Sate the tiger's hungry power!

But just as prey meets with claw
Falls the tiger 'pon the spot,
Bleeding dead on jungle floor
Fallen due to hunter's shot!

Finished, finished! Hunt no more!
Left for dead on jungle floor!
Tiger proud and crimson bold!
Recall the hunt you had of old!
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2005-04-18, 8:49 PM #2
Awsome :cool:
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Matt Bonner, The Lebron Killer
2005-04-21, 8:41 PM #3
Please. I spent 75 minutes on this thing.
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2005-04-21, 8:48 PM #4
Dang poachers :( ;)
I like the last stanza in particular... well done.

Certainly reminds me of Blake's poem
May the mass times acceleration be with you.
2005-04-21, 8:53 PM #5
Nice job. The way it's written, it'd almost be as enjoyable were it as prose.

I have a suggestion, though. The line "Fallen due to hunter's shot!" sounds kind of forced, so you might want to make it "Fallen to the hunter's shot". And there are a few other things that'd seem excessively nitpicky, so I won't mention them.

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