if that was you're funniest comic... then what are your other ones? Seriously, I liked the idea of making comics from noticable things in-game, but there should be more of a story and a catchy ending. Try to snaz it up by making the sequences easier to follow, and use different fonts for the quotes instead of regular text.
You could do one of the level after you beat Yun the first time, you know where you go up in an elevator and a TIE Bomber comes every time but always seems to hit the stormies there...:o
PS: BMP is not and never should be multi-media formats for the internet. Always use JPG if possible. BMPs take up loads of memory.
Also, try not to stretch your images too far to fit, or else they will be a distraction and a sign of n00bness